My Favorite Birthday Party

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My Favorite Birthday Party My Favorite Birthday Party My favorite birthday party happened when I turned 8 years old. The party was at a barn. We rode horses. I had a cake. My friends gave me presents. My party was fun!

Write, write, write! Pre-write: Think about your favorite birthday party. Draft: Write a paragraph describing your favorite birthday party.

My Favorite Birthday Party My Favorite Birthday Party My favorite birthday party happened when I turned 8 years old. The party was at a large barn. We rode beautiful, brown horses. I had an enormous, pink cake. My friends gave me marvelous presents. My party was fun!

Revise, revise, revise! With a partner, you will add adjectives to your writing. Remember, we want to help our reader visualize the event. Use carrots (^) to add the adjectives. large The party was at a ^ barn.

You are an awesome writer! Keep up the hard work!