WRITING A PROBLEM SOLUTION PARAGRAPH

How to Solve the Problem of Internal migration in Turkey

INTRODUCTORY SENTENCE Internal migration into urban areas is one of the major problems of Turkey because there are too many internal migrants from farms and rural areas in big cities, especially in Istanbul and Ankara. OR Internal migration due to large numbers of internal migrants from rural to urban areas is an ongoing concern which Turkey has to deal with.

TOPIC SENTENCE (closed) There are three possible/ effective solutions to the problem of internal migration in Turkey. There are three possible ways of permanently stopping internal migration into urban areas. Fortunately, there are a number of solutions which could stop internal migration into urban areas. This problem can be solved in three ways. There are three ways of solving this problem.

TOPIC SENTENCE (open) Three of the most commonly proposed solutions to the problem of internal migration in Turkey are building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas and creating better educational opportunities. There are three possible solutions to this problem; namely, building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas and creating better educational opportunities. Three ways of solving this problem are building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas and creating better educational opportunities.

MAJOR 1 The first solution to this problem is to build building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas First of all, in rural areas small and medium sized manufacturing plants can be built. One solution would be building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas

Minors for Major 1 Strength If this is/was done, employment rates in rural areas will/would become higher and this will/would help to increase rural income. Weakness However, such plants usually pay lower wages than those found in large cities. Moreover, they are expensive to build.

MAJOR 2 The other solution is to introduce introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas. The second and a better solution to this problem is to introduce a new law banning internal migration into urban areas. Secondly, a new law banning internal migration can be introduced.

Minors for Major 2 Strength This will/would stop internal migration completely in a short time... Weakness.....but it is/would be difficult to enforce such a law. What is more, it is against human rights.

MAJOR 3 The final and the most effective solution to the problem is creating better educational opportunities in rural areas. The last and the best solution to this problem is to create creating better educational opportunities. Finally, we can create better educational opportunities in rural areas.

Minors for Major 3 Weakness Although this might be an expensive solution as it requires a huge amount of funding by the government to build the schools and provide staff,... Strength.... it will pay off since it is one of the major causes of migration. When they see that their children might have a future, the families will probably choose to stay. Moreover, better education will increase their chances of getting better jobs in the future.

CONCLUDING SENTENCE Summary To sum up, the problem of internal migration in Turkey can be overcome by building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas and creating better educational opportunities. In summary, building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas and creating better educational opportunities are some of the solutions to the problem of internal migration in Turkey. Conclusion In conclusion, internal migration is a problem that can be solved by building small and medium sized manufacturing plants in rural areas, introducing a new law banning internal migration into urban areas; however, it is creating better educational opportunities that will really solve the problem. To conclude, internal migration is a serious problem that needs to be solved. Unless we do something about it, it will have devastating effects. To conclude, the sooner these solutions are put into action, the easier it will be to solve the problem of internal migration. In conclusion, it is essential that these solutions be put into action; otherwise, internal migration will have devastating effects on the country.