Friendship M 9
Friendship is __________ in our life. It can bring us _________________. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生没有朋友, 犹如人生没有了太阳。 important
Something about you and your best friend. How long have you been friends? What do you usually do together to have fun? How do you feel every time you stay together?
Unforgettable things with friends. What happened at first?___________________________ ___________________________. Help her friend live better in How did she feel? She didn’t know what to do and the new school she felt worried. What did she do then? ___________________________ ___________________________. What is the result now? We don’t know but we believe that Lingling is sure to get on well with her best friend. Lingling’s problem with her friend
What happened at first?___________________________ ___________________________. A beautiful smile How did she feel? _______________________________ made me feel the What happened then? ___________________________ touch of something ____________________________. bright and friendly What is the result now? _____________________________ ______________________________ Unforgettable things with friends. Zhang Bei’s experience with her best friend
Start: A _________________________________________________. Body: B____________ ______________ 1.What happened at first? ______________ __________________________________ 2. How did you feel? _____________________ 3. What happened then? __________________ ______________________________________ 4. What is the result now? _________________ ______________________________________ End: What do you learn about friendship from this thing? C _________________________________________________. A/An _______ thing in my friendship play with you help... trust... make you grow as a person have common topics share... bring you... keep the secrets make you feel comfortable/moved … Check one and fill it in the blank B However, once I almost ended our friendship. I still remember a/an ___ thing between us. Once a thing made our friendship deeper. On that day… You can start the story like this: some basic information (how long... / what do you do together...)
A / An ________________ thing in my friendship (happy, important, unforgettable…) _________________________________________________________ 注意时态变化 Pay attention: include all points, have enough words words
Your writing: 1.( ) includes all points 2. ( ) has enough words 3. ( ) is fluent( 流畅 ) （ has 3 clear parts ） 4.( ) has no vocabulary mistakes 5.( ) has a few vocabulary mistakes (<2) 6.( ) has many vocabulary mistakes (>3) 7.( ) has no grammar mistakes 8.( ) has a few grammar mistakes (<2) 9.( ) has many grammar mistakes (>3) 10.( ) has at least 1 beautiful sentence Choose one 1, 2, 3, 4/5, 7/8, 10 13—15 分 1, 2, 3, 5/6, 8/9, (10) 9—12 分 Other choices < 9 分
What do you want to say to your best friend now? My dear friend, …
1. Share your writing with your classmates or friends; 2. Try to write a thank-you card to your friend; 3. Finish the exercise book 9.3.
Cherish your friendship!