写话考核基本要求： 1. 内容切题．意思连贯，表达清楚、完 整． 个词，注意语法、拼写、标点、大 小写等的正确． 3. 内容充实，词汇和句型句式运用恰 当．

评分具体要求 得满分不容易，要求内容切题，意思连贯， 表达清楚。语言规范，词数、拼写、语法、 标点都符合要求。整篇的结构连贯、准确 和恰当。 分值变化： 分

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. ( 以 “ 我身边的爱 ” 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文, 标点符号不占格.) （ 08 年中考写话题 目） ( 注意 : 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相 关信息，否则不予评分。 ) Use the following points as a guide. （短文须包含 下列要点） · Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.) · How do you feel when you get love from him / her / them? · What are you going to do to show your love?

一. 审题 : 从审题的角度看, 提出了三个问题 : 即你身边有没有爱 ? 要举出一 两个例子. 当你从他人那儿得到爱时, 你感觉怎样 ? 你打算做些什 么来表达你的爱 ? 二. 写作构思 : 在写作构思上, 先罗列一些你身边的爱, 接着用一二件具体的事 例来突出描写爱的过程, 注意一定要有特色. 然后再写一下自己 得到爱的感受和体会, 适当描写一下自己的心里想法. 最后写一 点怎样来表达你的爱, 可以结合生活实际, 为同学, 为班级, 为学 校, 为社会做一些力所能及的事情. 最后可以强调和总结一下, 用一个谚语或感叹句等等结尾, 作文基本可以了.

范文 1: In my opinion, love can shorten the distance between people. The love around me also brings me a lot. For example, my parents treat me as the most precious person in their whole lives. My friends share tears and laughter, success and failure with me. The deep love, as well as the brilliant friendship, always makes me feel moved. And in return, I should show them how much I love them. I’ll try my best to make them happy and I will never forget the love around me as well.

范文 2: Love is everywhere. My parents love me, my friends care about me. When I am in difficulty, they will pull me out. When I feel sad, they will cheer me on. I feel delighted and thankful when I get love from them. I also want to do something to show my love to others. When they have some problems, I will try my best to help them. I do believe if we all love each other, then our world will become more and more beautiful.

写人 : My best friend Shirley is my best friend. She has big eyes and long hair. Her eyebrows are a little brown. Her eyes look like moon when she smiles. Shirley has many hobbies, but she likes writing compositions best. She has a big collection of hers compositions. She likes swimming, too. You can often see her swimming in summer ； that’s why she has a healthy body. Shirley is an apple of all the teachers’ and classmates’ eyes. She always gets more than 95 points in the tests. She can speak English very well. This is my best friend, Shirley. I like her, and she likes me, too.

写人 : My best friend Shirley is my best friend. She has big eyes and long hair. Her eyebrows are a little brown. Her eyes look like moon when she smiles. Shirley has many hobbies, but she likes writing compositions best. She has a big collection of hers compositions. She likes swimming, too. You can often see her swimming in summer ； that’s why she has a healthy body. Shirley is an apple of all the teachers’ and classmates’ eyes. She always gets more than 95 points in the tests. She can speak English very well. This is my best friend, Shirley. I like her, and she likes me, too.

写人 : My best friend 修改后 Shirley is my best friend. She has big eyes and long hair. Her eyebrows are a little brown. Her eyes look like moons when she smiles. Shirley has many hobbies, but she likes writing compositions best. She has a big collection of them. She likes swimming, too. You can often see her swimming in summer ； that’s why she has a healthy body. Shirley is the apple of all the teachers’ and classmates’ eyes. She always gets more than 95 points in tests. She can speak English very well. This is my best friend, Shirley. I like her, and she likes me, too.

写事 : Writing is fun Do you like writing? I like writing very much. When I feel happy or boring, I want to write something in my diary. I have a pen pal. She is from America, she is a cute girl, I like to write to her and hear from her. In my school, our psychology teacher tells us, if we have any problems in our life, we can write to her and she will help us in the letters. I think that’s a very good way to pour out hearts. Writing is good for us. I know a girl, she was born in Canada but she is a Chinese. She wrote a book in English when she was only 13 years old, then she became famous! In life, writing is useful and fun, so write more and you can learn more!

写事 : Writing is fun Do you like writing? I like writing very much. When I feel happy or boring, I want to write something in my diary. I have a pen pal. She is from America, she is a cute girl, I like to write to her and hear from her. In my school, our psychology teacher tells us, if we have any problems in our life, we can write to her and she will help us in the letters. I think that’s a very good way to pour out hearts. Writing is good for us. I know a girl, she was born in Canada but she is a Chinese. She wrote a book in English when she was only 13 years old, then she became famous! In life, writing is useful and fun, so write more and you can learn more!

写事 : Writing is fun 修改后 Do you like writing? I like writing very much. When I feel happy or bored, I want to write something in my diary. I have a pen pal. She is from America. She is a cute girl. I like to write to her and hear from her. In my school, our psychology teacher tells us, if we have any problems in our life, we can write to her and she will help us in the letters. I think that’s a very good way to pour out troubles. Writing is good for us. I know a girl. She was born in Canada but she is a Chinese. She wrote a book in English when she was only 13 years old, then she became famous! In life, writing is useful and fun, so write more and you can learn more!

My wonderful dream I have a wonderful dream, it is to be a famous writer, like Laoshe, Bingxin and Luxun. They are good at writing, I want to exceed them, so I want to be a good writer. I enjoy writing with the words, they are interesting, and they can make the article elegant. So I want to work with the interesting words. To make the dream come true, I have paid many. For this purpose, I write article everyday, I have read many books, that help me to have improved many. If my dream comes true, I will go for it, and do better than now.

My wonderful dream I have a wonderful dream, it is to be a famous writer, like Laoshe, Bingxin and Luxun. They are good at writing, I want to exceed them, so I want to be a good writer. I enjoy writing with the words, they are interesting, and they can make the article elegant. So I want to work with the interesting words. To make the dream come true, I have paid many. For this purpose, I write article everyday, I have read many books, that help me to have improved many. If my dream comes true, I will go for it, and do better than now.

My wonderful dream I have a wonderful dream to be a famous writer, like Laoshe, Bingxin and Luxun. They were good at writing. I want to exceed them. I enjoy using words. They are interesting and can make the article elegant. So I want to work with interesting words. To make the dream come true, I write articles every day. I have read many books to help me improve my writing. To make my dream come true I will go for it, and do better all the time.