1. Unit Four : Create Sentence Parallel in Structure and Meaning 句子的結構須有一致性 柯泰德網路線上科技英 文論文編修訓練服務

2. 科技英文寫作中，句 子的建構必須有一致 性。

3. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n It is a fact that engineers select an appropriate variable and the transformed observations are treated as though they are normally distributed with a constant variance.

4. 較佳 : It is a fact that engineers select an appropriate variable and treat the transformed observations as though they are normally distributed with a constant variance.

5. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n Those methods neither require previous knowledge of how the variables are distributed nor are the censored data stipulated to be available. n 較佳 :Those methods neither require previous knowledge of how the variables are distributed nor stipulate availability of the censored data.

6. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n Experimental design is used in this method to arrange the design parameters and noise factors in the orthogonal arrays and computing the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio based on the quality loss for each experimental combination.

7. 較佳 : Experimental design is used in this method to arrange the design parameters and noise factors in the orthogonal arrays and to compute the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio based on the quality loss for each experimental combination.

8. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n The relative importance of each response can be transformed into a fuzzy number through means of the establishment of a formal scale system that can be used to convert linguistic terms into their corresponding fuzzy numbers and to express the relative importance of each response by the linguistic term.

9. 較佳 : The relative importance of each response can be transformed into a fuzzy number through means of establishing a formal scale system that can convert linguistic terms into their corresponding fuzzy numbers and expressing the relative importance of each response by the linguistic term.

10. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n The Taguchi approach provides a combination of experimental design techniques with quality loss considerations and that the average quadratic loss is minimized. n 較佳 : The Taguchi combines experimental design techniques with quality loss considerations and minimizes the average quadratic loss.

11. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n The conventional approach happens to be cumbersome, complicated and wastes too much time. n 較佳 : The conventional approach happens to be cumbersome, complicated and time consuming.

12. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n The two-step procedure not only identifies those factors that significantly affect the signal-to- noise (SN) ratio, but also the levels that maximize SN are found. n 較佳 : The two-step procedure not only identifies those factors that significantly affect the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio, but also finds the levels that maximize SN.

13. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n Logethetis (1988) proved that strong non-linearities exist and the B technique was also recommended for use by him. n 較佳 : Logethetis (1988) proved that strong non-linearities exist and also recommended using the B technique.

14. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n This work not only proposes an effective procedure based on the rank transformation of responses and regression analysis, but also the singly censored data are discussed.

15. 較佳 :This work not only proposes an effective procedure based on the rank transformation of responses and regression analysis, but also discusses the singly censored data.

16. 您會如何修改此文句 呢 ? n Conventional approaches offer an explanation of this phenomenon and providing alternative strategies to solve the problem. n 較佳 :Conventional approaches explain this phenomenon and provide alternative strategies to solve the problem.

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