2. Composition How to Write Good Sentences

3. Sample 1 As the living standard improves more and more, people are paying attention to their health conditions. Different people usually have different ways to stay healthy. In my opinion, the most important thing is to keep a healthy attitude toward life. As the living standard improves more and more, people are paying attention to their health conditions. Different people usually have different ways to stay healthy. In my opinion, the most important thing is to keep a healthy attitude toward life.

4. It is true that physical factors affect one’s health conditions a great deal, but at the same time, we should not neglect the mental factors. Many scientific researches have shown that anger, suspicion and anxiety do great harm to human bodies while being optimistic can cure some small diseases. We have also heard of many people who live much longer than doctors’ prediction after they have been diagnosed incurable diseases. That is, because they keep a good mood and struggle with the difficulties in life. Compared with those people who suffer serious physical pains, we healthy people are much more lucky and therefore have more reasons to maintain a healthy attitude to life no matter what kind of hardship life may give us. It is true that physical factors affect one’s health conditions a great deal, but at the same time, we should not neglect the mental factors. Many scientific researches have shown that anger, suspicion and anxiety do great harm to human bodies while being optimistic can cure some small diseases. We have also heard of many people who live much longer than doctors’ prediction after they have been diagnosed incurable diseases. That is, because they keep a good mood and struggle with the difficulties in life. Compared with those people who suffer serious physical pains, we healthy people are much more lucky and therefore have more reasons to maintain a healthy attitude to life no matter what kind of hardship life may give us.

5. People use all kinds of methods to keep healthy because they want to live happily. Then in my point of view, there is no other way than keeping a healthy attitude toward life can make people happy or more healthy, both physically and mentally. People use all kinds of methods to keep healthy because they want to live happily. Then in my point of view, there is no other way than keeping a healthy attitude toward life can make people happy or more healthy, both physically and mentally.

6. Sample 2 Nowadays people are becoming increasing aware of the importance of health. Although people have various ways to stay healthy, as far as I can see, the best of them is to eat proper food in the proper way. Nowadays people are becoming increasing aware of the importance of health. Although people have various ways to stay healthy, as far as I can see, the best of them is to eat proper food in the proper way.

7. “Eat an apply everyday and you will never need a doctor.” This old saying in America has already showed the importance of proper food. Since our body needs various kinds of neutritions, we have to eat different kinds of food in order to get them. For example, in order to get enough Vitamin B, we have to eat enough meet, milk, and eggs. In order to get enough Vitamin C, we have to eat lots of fruit and vegetables. At the same time, the food has to be taken in the right way. For instance, you should not eat as much food for the supper as for the breakfast. “Eat an apply everyday and you will never need a doctor.” This old saying in America has already showed the importance of proper food. Since our body needs various kinds of neutritions, we have to eat different kinds of food in order to get them. For example, in order to get enough Vitamin B, we have to eat enough meet, milk, and eggs. In order to get enough Vitamin C, we have to eat lots of fruit and vegetables. At the same time, the food has to be taken in the right way. For instance, you should not eat as much food for the supper as for the breakfast.

8. As the conclusion, proper food that is eaten in the proper way, can be the best to help us stay healthy, not only because it provides us with all the neutritions our body need, but also because it is a pleasure to enjoy. Make the best use of your everyday food, and your health will stay with you forever! As the conclusion, proper food that is eaten in the proper way, can be the best to help us stay healthy, not only because it provides us with all the neutritions our body need, but also because it is a pleasure to enjoy. Make the best use of your everyday food, and your health will stay with you forever!

9. Sample 3 Nowadays people like to be healthy. So they choose many ways to keep healthy. But in my opinion, the best way to stay healthy is to do some exercise. Nowadays people like to be healthy. So they choose many ways to keep healthy. But in my opinion, the best way to stay healthy is to do some exercise.

10. As you know, the living conditions have increased a lot. People can eat delicious food. They can also see their doctor when they are ill. But they don’t know how to keep healthy. I think people will keep healthy if they do much exercise. Today people eat well, but they are sometimes too lazy. So they become fatter and fatter. Then some diseases come to them. Then they become ill. If they do exercise, they can’t become fat, and can get away from the illnesses. They can also enjoy themselves during doing the exercise. As you know, the living conditions have increased a lot. People can eat delicious food. They can also see their doctor when they are ill. But they don’t know how to keep healthy. I think people will keep healthy if they do much exercise. Today people eat well, but they are sometimes too lazy. So they become fatter and fatter. Then some diseases come to them. Then they become ill. If they do exercise, they can’t become fat, and can get away from the illnesses. They can also enjoy themselves during doing the exercise. On the whole, to do much exercise is the best way to keep healthy. If you don’t believe me, have a try. On the whole, to do much exercise is the best way to keep healthy. If you don’t believe me, have a try.

11. The isolation of the rural world, because of distance and the lack of transport facilities, is compounded by the paucity of the information media. The isolation of the rural world, because of distance and the lack of transport facilities, is compounded by the paucity of the information media. 由于距离远，又缺乏交通工具，使农村 社会与外界隔绝，而这种隔绝，又由于 通讯工具不足而变得更加严重。 由于距离远，又缺乏交通工具，使农村 社会与外界隔绝，而这种隔绝，又由于 通讯工具不足而变得更加严重。 Because there is a great distance and there are not enough transport facilities, the rural world is isolated. This isolation has become more serious because there are not enough information media. Because there is a great distance and there are not enough transport facilities, the rural world is isolated. This isolation has become more serious because there are not enough information media.

12. Conciseness It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people. It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people. Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese. Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese.

13. Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away. Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away. She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework. She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework. If the government agency finds that an individual has received a payment to which the individual was not entitled, whether or not the payment was due to the individual’s fault or misrepresentation, the individual shall be reliable to repay to the government the total sum of the payment to which the individual was not entitled. If the government agency finds that an individual has received a payment to which the individual was not entitled, whether or not the payment was due to the individual’s fault or misrepresentation, the individual shall be reliable to repay to the government the total sum of the payment to which the individual was not entitled. If the government agency finds that you received a payment that you weren’t entitled to, you must pay the entire sum back. If the government agency finds that you received a payment that you weren’t entitled to, you must pay the entire sum back.

14. Skills: Skills: 1. Use prepositional phrases 1. Use prepositional phrases While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning. While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning. During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. At the second traffic light turn left. At the second traffic light turn left.

15. 2. Do away with “who is”, “that is” 2. Do away with “who is”, “that is” The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. 3. Do away with redundant words: 3. Do away with redundant words: Different kinds of students Different kinds of students Different students Different students Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

16. 4. Avoid negators of no, not 4. Avoid negators of no, not Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing. Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing. College students who lack sufficient financial backing. College students who lack sufficient financial backing.

17. Varied Sentence Pattern Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone. Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone. Taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent have crammed Beijing streets in rising numbers in the last few years– 1.2 million vehicles at last count. Taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent have crammed Beijing streets in rising numbers in the last few years– 1.2 million vehicles at last count.