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2. Format Word Count Ensure IB Themes/Concepts are Evident

3. 1. In Mid-Page/Center: 2. Title Page: Critique 3. Student Name 4. School Name 5. Date 6. Word Count

4. In your opening, you should have clearly stated how your observation was either descriptive or analytical and did that affect your data. See Sample A, first-third paragraphs to see how the writer explained their tendency to analyze and not just describe and what effect that had on their report.

5. Criteria B: Critique0-4Goal: 2-3+  Do you clearly state how your observation contains a distinction between description (just what you saw) and analysis ( it should be the first thing you discuss).  Did you describe or did you explain behavior?  How detailed and accurate did you describe behavior-consider what you know now versus October? How you have observed/described differently today vs then?  How can you accurately explain behavior before studying the methodology of Anthropology?

6.  Gender Bias: did you make analysis that was grounded in assumptions of gender roles?  Androcentric Bias : did you exclude the roles/actions of women or downgrade them in your observation.  Religious Bias : did the subjects or your religious beliefs affect your observation, description, and analysis?  Class Bias : did you value the people, behavior, and context that you observed? Did it affect your pre-conceived notions expectations?  TOK: expected outcomes determined your observation  CONFIRMATION BIAS  “Iceberg” tip of the iceberg  Materialist Bias : did your focus on the material goods people had prevent you from accurately describing their actions? Did it force you into assumptions about their class/social status?  Emic : insider point of view (its effect-assumptions). Were you too quick to assume a behavior rather than just describing it?  Etic : outsider point of view (its effect-see Sample A, did it affect subjects as well as your observation).

7. Criteria C: Focus, Assumptions, Bias 0-6 Goal 3-4+  This can be discussed in your Critique while you are explaining how your focused on description or analysis in Criteria B.  You must discuss the Nature of the Observation: Did how you conducted/set up/carried out your Observation affect negative/positively your Observation Report. Discuss/refer to where you were, YOUR POSITION, and how that influenced your Report (and subjects- and their behavior).  Consider how Lee did his Ethnography (but don’t necessarily reference him in your Critique), or Fernea or Schactman.  How did their positions/methods affect their observations?

8. Criteria D: 0-5 points Goal 3-4+  You have to demonstrate that you have gained an understanding of Anthropology over the course of this year.  This means you have to correctly/accurately/relevantly employ concepts and key terms from the text/ethnographies/class.  Show evidence of anthropological understanding and connect to your report/data.

9. Some concepts: 1. Structure : behavior is controlled/pre-determined 2. Agency : humans determine behavior free of influence or in resistance to it. 3. Identity : individual, groups, society (age groups/sets, gender, class, occupation, kinship, marriage, religion, globalization). 4. Language : Code Switching 5. Race/Ethnicity : did physical appearance determine/affect your observation 6. Conflict : subculture resistance/defiance vs. mainstream 7. Power and Authority : relevant structures conformity/non- conformity 8. Exploitation/Globalization : shopping at Walmart reinforces the low wages in developing countries and sends manufacturing jobs that were American away, thus reducing the middle class. 9. Taboos/Morals : did behavior conform or defy/break with mainstream cultural norms.

10. (B & C) Criteria B: Description and Analysis: Scored 4/4 (D) Criteria C: Middle portion of Critique discusses how position affected subjects and report, preconceived responses based on emotion, too much analysis, too little description. Scores 4/4 (E) Criteria D: refers to Mbuti, Age Sets, gender roles, separation (Gennep: separation, liminal, incorporation/reincorporation “Rumspringa”). Scored 4/4

11. Writer played hockey as a youth, game was older players, pro-game, large arena vs. youth games, watched the game too. Diversity: race/class Position: outer side, choose observe during game b/c writer would be un-noticed. Focused on two groups: ? Interesting People: Weird: class, race, crazy, woman. Groups of People: vendors- low-wage, door managers, hooligans,

12. ( C) Criteria B: How do they discuss position and nature of observation, their examples, and are they aware of biases? (D) Criteria C: How does the writer refer to assumptions/value judgments and do they indicate those are social and personal? It is discussed and examples cited/given? (E) Criteria D: How does the writer indicated anthropological understanding in Critique? Evidence of methodological issues?

13. ( C) Criteria B: How do they discuss position and nature of observation, their examples, and are they aware of biases? (D) Criteria C: How does the writer refer to assumptions/value judgments and do they indicate those are social and personal? It is discussed and examples cited/given? (E) Criteria D: How does the writer indicated anthropological understanding in Critique? Evidence of methodological issues?

14. ( C) Criteria B: How do they discuss position and nature of observation, their examples, and are they aware of biases? (D) Criteria C: How does the writer refer to assumptions/value judgments and do they indicate those are social and personal? It is discussed and examples cited/given? (E) Criteria D: How does the writer indicated anthropological understanding in Critique? Evidence of methodological issues?