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4 February 2016 Bell Activity: Finish worksheet paragraphs based on the movie notes you took and your knowledge of the novel. one person from each group.

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1 4 February 2016 Bell Activity: Finish worksheet paragraphs based on the movie notes you took and your knowledge of the novel. one person from each group pass out novels everyone needs: the novel movie/novel worksheets, your notes, a pen, timeline key. … to write a comparison/contrast paragraph Today we will learn

2 On the MOVIE TO NOVEL WORKSHEETS the following questions allow you to write a “CONTRAST PARAGRAPH” : #2: In the movie Buck meets Billee, Spitz and Dave after he arrives at Dyea Beach. How is this different than the novel? # 7 In the movie Hal announces, “Everyone just relax. With seven dogs we are really going to fly!” Contrast this statement with the dog sled team Hal, Charlie and Mercedes use in the novel when they leave Dyeah Beach by describing the team from the novel and the problems with it #8. Contrast the novel with the movie (show how they are different)… by describing what happens in the novel when Charles attempts to force Mercedes to walk by removing her from the sled. #10. Describe the differences between movie version and the novel version of Buck pulling the sled to win the bet. #11 Describe a favorite scene from the novel that the movie did not include, but should have included. Then explain why you feel it should have been included in the movie.

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4 Subject-by-subject:. EXAMPLE:

5 SUBJECT-BY-SUBJECT BOB’S PIZZARIO PLACE uses only the highest quality ingredients. Similarly, SAMMY’S PIZZA JOINT also uses only the highest quality ingredients. Evidence……. a. b. b.1 quote Evidence……. a. b. b.1 quote Evidence……. a. a. 1 quote b. Evidence……. a. a. 1 quote b.

6 In this SUBJECT BY SUBJECT it takes two paragraphs to provide the comparison. Be careful to keep the same warrants in both paragraphs. Because you are using two different paragraphs, the claim sentence for the first does not need to cover both paragraphs. However, the claim sentence for the second paragraph should indicate that a comparison or a contrast is being made.

7 Point-by-point: Rather than addressing things one subject at a time, you may wish to talk about one point of comparison or contrast at a time. EXAMPLE:

8 POINT-BY-POINT Bob’s Pizzario Place and Sammy’s Pizza Joint both create excellent pizzas. Evidence……. a. Bob’s Pizzario Place imports………….. b. Additionally, Bob’s……….. b.1 According to …. “quote.” c. Similarly Sammy’s Pizza Joint buys….. d. Furthermore, Sammy’s ……… Evidence……. a. Bob’s Pizzario Place imports………….. b. Additionally, Bob’s……….. c. Similarly Sammy’s Pizza Joint….. d. Furthermore, Sammy’s ……… d.1. In the menu it states, “quote.”

9 In “POINT BY POINT” the contrast is done within one paragraph. Therefore, Unlike the SUBJECT BY SUBJECT style, the claim sentence must be broad enough to cover both items and indicate that a comparison or contrast is being made. Additionally, It is imperative that the writer follow a similar pattern when it comes to the evidence for each of the warrants.

10 Additionally, similar to, also similarly, In the same way, likewise, compared to, In a like manner, To help your reader keep track of where you are in the comparison/contrast, you’ll want to be sure that your TRANSITIONS are especially CLEAR AND STRONG. Unlike In contrast, On the contrary, However, Conversely,, but Although….. however, Comparison transitions Contrast transitions

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12 STEP BY STEP

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