1. New Tribe – Business Writing Section 5 Instructor: Hada Ieong Jack Cheang Email: hada.ieong@gmail.comhada.ieong@gmail.com jack.cheang@gmail.com 6/10/2016 1

2. Today’s Outline 1.Review: Q & A ▫8 Part of Speeches ▫5 sentences patterns ▫Punctuations ▫Phrasal words and connections ▫Paragraph/Essay ▫Business Writings: Letter/MEMO/E-mail/Report ▫Review in-class exercise on Section 4 2.Writing: Love Letter 3.In Class Exercise 2 6/10/2016

3. Parts of Speech 6/10/2016 3 Parts of Speech NounPronounVerbPrepositionAdverbAdjectiveConjunctionInterjectionArticle

4. Sentence Patterns Five Basic Sentence Patterns 1.Subject + Verb I swim. Joe swims. They swam.Subject + Verb 2.Subject + Verb + Object I drive a car. Joe plays the guitar. They ate dinner.Subject + Verb + Object 3.Subject + Verb + Complement I am busy. Joe became a doctor. They look sick.Subject + Verb + Complement 4.Subject + Verb + Indirect Object + Direct Object I gave her a gift. She teaches us English.Subject + Verb + Indirect Object + Direct Object 5.Subject + Verb + Object + Complement I left the door open. We elected him president. They named her Jane.Subject + Verb + Object + Complement

5. Sentence Connectors for, so because, since Therefore Due to C/E and just as similarly Comp. But Unlike Whereas In contrast On the other hand Contrast if Unless otherwise Cond. 6/10/2016 5

6. 6 Simple Sentence Main clause

7. Complex Sentence Main clause Dependent clause Complex Sentence 6/10/2016 7 Compound Sentence Main Clause, Conj Compound Sentence Main Clause

8. Compound – complex sentence Main Clause 1, Conj Main Clause 2 Dependent Clause Compound - Complex 6/10/2016 8

9. Proper Punctuation Methods IC. I went to the store. I didn't buy any bread. IC; IC. I went to the store; I didn't buy any bread. IC, CC IC. I went to the store, but I didn't buy any bread. IC; IM, IC. I went to the store; however, I didn't buy any bread. DC, IC. When I went to the store, I didn't buy any bread. IC DC. I didn't buy any bread when I went to the store.

10. Review - Writing an Essay Introduction Hook ▫ - General idea Thesis Statement Body Paragraphs ▫ - Topic Sentence ▫ - Supporting Sentences ▫ - Transition Conclusion ▫ - Thesis Restatement ▫ - Summary ▫ - Leave Space to Reader to think 6/10/2016 10

11. Reminder: Homework Write a five paragraph essay and send it to Ms. Hada Ieong at hada.ieong@gmail.com Due date: April 26, 2009

12. Business Writings 1.Letter ▫Formal: Cover Letters, references ▫External uses 2.MEMO ▫Less formal than letter but more formal than E-mail ▫Internal uses 3.E-mail ▫Informal communication ▫Both external and internal uses 4.Complaint Letter ▫Make to the point. Try to be polite as you can. 5.Report ▫Terms of Ref. + Procedure + Findings + Conclusions + Recommendations 6/10/2016 12

13. In-Class exercise from Section 4 Let’s review the writings 6/10/2016 13

14. Reading Comprehension and Writing Skills - Task Transferring Answers To the Answer Sheet

15. Sample Answer and Marking System

16. Today Lesson: How to write a love letter Clear your desk and your mind of distractions “If you love someone enough to craft this letter, he/she deserves your full attention. Place a picture of his/hers on your desk Put on your favorite music Take out your best letter writing stationery and pen Personalize the salutation – “Dear XX,” or “To my darling XX,” 6/10/2016 16

17. Love Letter Body Paragraph ▫Tell him/her what you think makes him/her special. ▫List at least 3 different qualities you love, ideally emotional, spiritual and physical Share your hopes and dreams for the future you can have together Personalize the closing ▫“I will love you always.” ▫“Loving you forever.” ▫“My heart is yours.” 6/10/2016 17

18. Writing Tips for Love Letter 1.Don’t mention anyone else but yourself and the addressee in the letter. 2.Make sure you only send a love letter to someone who will appreciate it. 3.Pick out a special stamp for your love letter at the post office. 4.Don’t forget to sign your name! 5.Spray the letter with a light fragrance. 6.Address, seal and stamp the love letter 7.Wait a day before you send your love letter; you may change your mind. 8.Drop the love letter in the mail, and look forward to the response. 6/10/2016 18

19. Dear Judy, If only I could have come up with the right words to describe the depth of this beautiful feeling that I have for you, I would have whispered them to you the first time we met. The best thing that I can do is to show you now. I love you so much, Sweetie. You are the best thing that ever happened to me. You are like the best poetry ever composed, the best song ever played, the best picture ever painted. I never thought that someone like me could get so lucky! I love you more than my life, more than my world. I love you more and more each day and that is the most wonderful feeling any man can ever hope to experience. Forever Yours, Jerry 6/10/2016 19

20. Dear Jeff, I am so thankful I met you! You are the most important person in my life. I never thought I would find someone like you to share my life with, and now I don't even want to imagine what my life would be like without you in it. I love the way you make me laugh, how we tell each other everything, how we do everything together. Wherever you are is where I want to be. When we are together, I feel like it's just you and me, there's no one else on earth. I feel like we're the only ones here. I fall madly in love with you more and more each day. If there’s one thing in this world I know, it's that I AM SO IN LOVE WITH YOU!! Love always, Ashley 6/10/2016 20

21. Thank you for coming! 6/10/2016 21