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1 Essay 4 After Twilight: Los Angeles, 1992 Crisis & Call-to-Action

2 research

3 Sources for Research Try these library databases to find articles for this essay: Academic Search Complete JSTOR Opposing Viewpoints CQ Researcher America: History & Life PsycArticles Try these credible newspapers/magazines to find articles for this essay: Los Angeles Times The New York Times Time magazine Time magazine

4 Works Cited Page Alphabetize by last name of each author. Use hanging indent for 2 nd, 3 rd lines, etc. Double space whole page. See Writing & Revising (228-241) for more info.

5 Format each entry properly: Last name, First name. Title of Book. City: Publisher, year. Print. Last name, First name. Title of Book. City: Publisher, year. Name of Database. Web. date accessed. ebook. Last name, First name. “Title of Article.” Title of Periodical volume. issue (year): pages. Name of Database. Web. date accessed. Last name, First name. “Article.” Book. Ed. Editor. City: Publisher, Year of Publication. Page Numbers of the Article. Series. Reprint of “Article.” Periodical Publication Date: Page Numbers. Database. Web. date accessed. Wexler, Arnie, and Sheila Wexler. “The Hidden Addiction: Compulsive Gambling.” Legalized Gambling. Ed. Mary E. Williams. San Diego: Greenhaven P, 1999. N. pag. Contemporary Issues Companion Ser. Rpt. of “The Hidden Addiction.” Professional Counselor June 1997: n. pag. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Web. April 14, 2016.

6 types of evidence(see Writing & Revising 35-45) -facts -statistics -expert testimony -examples (personal, real life, or hypothetical) types of appeals(see Writing & Revising 203-206) -logos- logical, objective, reader’s mind -pathos - emotional, sentimental, reader’s heart -ethos- writer’s credibility, reader’s trust -other: patriotic, “for the kids,” environmental, “for the future,” historical practice -Which evidence would work best with which appeal? Why? -Which type of evidence or appeal is best overall? Why? Evidence & Appeals

7 outline

8 Thesis Statement Use the problem / solution worksheet to help as you draft the thesis, outline, essay. The thesis statement of your paper should clearly specify the problem and your proposed solutions. It should be two to three sentences or more. The order of the thesis should match the order of the supporting paragraphs.

9 One half of the essay should explain the crisis: -What is the problem? -Where does it take place? -What are the causes? -What or who is most affected? -Who might not see it as a problem? The other half of the essay should include your call to action: -What are the possible solutions? -What are the benefits of the solutions? -What are possible limitations of the solutions? -How much will the solutions cost? Who will pay for them? -Who might best solve the problem? Individuals, government, businesses, or a combination? Structure

10 Outline : subject by subject I.intro II.problem ¶ III.problem ¶ IV.problem ¶ V.solution ¶ VI.solution ¶ VII.solution ¶ VIII.conclusion

11 Outline : alternating style I.intro II.problem ¶ III.solution ¶ IV.problem ¶ V.solution ¶ VI.problem ¶ VII.solution ¶ VIII.conclusion

12 write

13 Review Writing & Revising (214-227) for many more details on integrating sources You should use research that supports your position or thesis. – Do you understand the author’s position? – Does the evidence actually match your topic sentence & thesis? You can also use articles or sources that contradict or disagree with you. Analyze and critique such sources in order to build up your case. Incorporating Research

14 I C E = – introduce – cite – Explain Use signal phrases: – In her article, Professor Jones states, “ – A recent study by Columbia University indicates that “ – On the other hand, Dr. Martinez argues, “ It is important to distinguish between your words and the words of your sources. I C E

15 See Writing & Revising (209-218) for more details. Cite all researched information: – quotations – paraphrases – summaries of information – uncommon ideas When in doubt, quote the source. Quoting is the safest format. However, cite even when paraphrasing. Include all citations as you draft; do not wait to add them in later. Why? Basic citation format: (Jones 227). Cite (or else!)

16 write an informative yet interesting title write a descriptive hook that appeals to your readers introduce the debate in the introduction ask for help wear your writer’s hat (or shoes or... ) Don’t forget to...


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