1. Agenda DBQ due on Friday!! Bring a FLASHDRIVE Dress in RED WHITE AND BLUE TOMORROW! WARM UP: Get out your DBQ packet and EVIDENCE sheet from yesterday. Create your thesis statement and write it on the evidence sheet. – Answer the question – Provide 3 reasons why – Have 3 verbs – Include an adjectives and adverbs Here is an example: The Georgia colony was a true success in providing charity for the misfortunate colonist, but it was an epic failure in regards to defending the colony of Charleston and producing raw materials England.

2. Format and Heading – AC Times New Roman 12 point Font Double Space Chuckles Patrick Berry 1 September 16, 2015 Georgia Colony DBQ The Utopic Colony of Georgia 1. Create your own title 2. Center and BOLD 3. Skip TWO lines, indent and type introduction

3. Format and Heading- Social Studies Times New Roman 12 point Font Double Space Chuckles Patrick Berry 2 September 16, 2015 Georgia Colony DBQ The Georgia colony was a true success in providing charity for the misfortunate colonist, but it was an epic failure in regards to defending the colony of Charleston and producing raw materials England. The colony of Georgia was a tremendous success in providing charity to the debtors of England. Document a states that all poor and unfortunate humans being ….. 1. Your title is your thesis 2. Center and BOLD 3. Skip TWO lines, indent and type first body paragraph

4. McDonald’s has targeted children in the form of toys, fun characters, and playgrounds. As stated in document A, McDonalds created the happy meal with a toy, Ronald’s fun friends, and their playgrounds to entice children to eat their food. This sleazy persuasive tactic is immoral because they created generations of adult who grew up feasting on fast food. Document C states that new healthier options are being offered as kid’s meal sides. However, the main course of the meal remains the same unhealthy, processed food option. As you can see, McDonalds would even stoop to a child’s level to brainwash taste buds to crave their product.

5. Citation Examples Document B shows that during the War of Jenkins’ Ear, Georgia was a successful buffer colony protecting Charleston from Spanish invasion. The War of Jenkins Ear provides evidence that Georgia was a successful form of defense against Spanish invasion of Charleston (Doc B). DIRECT QUOTE: It states in the background essay, “ The undertaking was paternalistic through and through.”

6. The FOLLOWING SLIDES ARE TO ASSIST AC STUDENTS WITH THEIR INTRODUCTION AND CONCLUSION

7. Types of Hooks HIPSOMA Anecdote Defintion Quotation/Dialogue Setting General to specific Sentence fragements Cliché Descriptive words Questions WITHOUT A YES/NO ANSWER

8. Other examples Anecdote--John was missing his family after he moved across the country, but thanks to Facebook, he could stay connected. Definition—Facebook is an online community. Quotation--Mark Zuckerberg once said, “Facebook is the future of family reunions.” Setting—Friends sharing recipes. Family members posting pictures. Childhood friends staying connected. General to specific—Success is not always the absence of failure. Sometimes success is produced from failure.

9. Other examples Sentence fragments—Sharing recipes. Posting pictures. Checking in. All of these features are possible through Facebook. Clichés--Actions speak louder than words.

10. HIPSOMOA Hyperbole--Billions of people use Facebook everyday. Idiom--With Facebook, a person can connect to friends around the world in a New York minute. Personification--When a person is missing his/her family, Facebook can’t wait to tell him what’s going on. Simile--Facebook is a like a surprise party. Onomatopoeia--Click, Click, Click, and you can connect with friends. Metaphor--Facebook is an electronic family reunion Alliteration--Facebook fantastically finds my friends. Anecdote--John was missing his family after he moved across the country, but thanks to Facebook, he could stay connected. Definition—Facebook is an online community. Quotation--Mark Zuckerberg once said, “Facebook is the future of family reunions.” Setting—Friends sharing recipes. Family members posting pictures. Childhood friends staying connected. General to specific—Success is not always the absence of failure. Sometimes success is produced from failure. Descriptive words--Anxiously logging in to the wonderful world of Facebook, people can peruse their close community of friends and family on their own time. Question--How can people be connected from across the world?

11. Turning Evidence into an Argument Argument is expressing a point of view on a subject using evidence. It is your interpretation of a set of information (evidence). Make your point! Use strong vocabulary. Avoid summarizing the evidence. The word “argument” does not have to be written anywhere in your assignment. In other words, avoid saying you are making an argument – just do it. Remember to avoid using any personal pronouns. Think of it like the closing statements an attorney uses once all evidence in a case has been presented.

12. Closing First sentence should be STRONG Restate your thesis Drive HOME your argument.

13. Closing Example Success at the expense of others is truly a failure. McDonald’s has been failing with the fact that they have increased the promotions towards children, increase the fat in their food, and increased the portion size to make a profit. Similar to a drug dealer, McDonald’s should be accountable since they have been dealing their edible drug for over 50 years. Even though they have attempted to correct some of their past mistakes today in the form of healthier options, posted nutritional value, and smaller portion sizes, their company will never truly be a success when they have failed society for so long.