1. RESUME HEADING POOR John Doe 125 Concord Dr. Allison Park, Pa 412-367-2792 buzzkill69@yahoo.com SPELL OUT ALL WORDS GOOD Mr. John Doe 125 Concord Drive Allison Park, Pennsylvania (412) 367-2792 (h) jdoe@gmail.com

2. EDUCATION POOR Hampton High School. Allison Park, Pa. GPA:2.2 Expected to graduate Spanish 2 Racket Sports Gourmet on the run DON’T LIE, BUT DON’T TELL ALL. LIST ONLY PERTINENT COURSES (AT LEAST 3) GOOD Hampton High School. Allison Park, Pennsylvania. GPA:4.5/5.0 Expected to graduate: June 2012 Advanced Placement English Accounting I Spanish I and II

3. EXPERIENCE POOR Mowed Lawns Hampton Neighborhood. Allison Park, Pa. Summer of 2010-12. Cut grass Trimmed grass Bagged grass Use strong action verbs! GOOD Landscaper (Lawn Person) Hampton Neighborhood. Allison Park, Pennsylvania. Summer of 2010-2012. Developed lawn schedule Maintained lawn equipment Created customer base Collected money

4. EXPERIENCE POOR Babysitter Mr. & Mrs. John Jones. Gibsonia, Pa. August 2011-present. Watched children Fed children Played with kids Put kids to bed Verb tense does not match “Present” GOOD Babysitter Mr. & Mrs. John Jones, Gibsonia, Pennsylvania. August 2011-present. Supervise two toddlers Prepare meals and snacks Create activities for children Managed bedtime routine

5. SKILLS POOR Leaving this section empty. You need to list at least 3 skills. Please include all technological skills. Don’t take your skills for granite! GOOD Proficient in Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint Familiar with Internet and E-mail Active with Twitter and Facebook Operate cash register Experienced with Java and C++ computer programming

6. ACTIVITIES POOR Band – 2008-Present Hampton Football – 2009 2 nd Grade Honor Roll - 1998 FBLA – 2008-present LIST IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER GOOD Future Business Leaders of America – 2008-present Hampton Band – 2008-present Hampton Varsity Football – 2009- present Volunteer at St. Catherine’s Bible School – Summer of 2011