1. Description: Drafting Lesson 135

2. Drafting The topic sentence should be the first sentence of your paragraph. Your details should be organized in a way that makes sense.

3. Description: Revising Lesson 136

4. Introduction How do sensory words help make a description clear? How can a good topic sentence make a description clear?

5. Revising Checklist 1.Do all the details tell about the topic sentence? 2.Are the details written in an order that makes sense? 3.Does the paragraph need more sensory words? 4.Does the paragraph use exact words?

6. Proofreading Marks Λ Add Delete Move

7. Description: Proofreading Lesson 137

8. Introduction How is the first line of a paragraph different from its other lines? Why do we use paragraphs in writing?

9. Proofreading Checklist 1.I put a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence. 2.I put a punctuation mark at the end of each sentence. 3.I used capital letters correctly within the sentences.

10. Proofreading Checklist 4.I indented the beginning of the paragraph. 5.I looked for misspelled words.

11. Proofreading Marks Λ Add Delete Capital letter Lowercase Move

12. Description: Publishing Lesson 138

13. Introduction What are some sensory details in this description?