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Unit Three : Ensure that Pronoun References are Clear in Meaning Українська навчальна система написання текстів в комп'ютерній мережі. Впевніться, що.

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2 Unit Three : Ensure that Pronoun References are Clear in Meaning Українська навчальна система написання текстів в комп'ютерній мережі. Впевніться, що зв'язок займеника зі словами в реченні, має ясний зміст

3 Читач невірно розуміє зміст речень, коли займенники в цих реченях не мають ясного зв ’ язку зі словами, до яких ці займенники відносяться. “ An antecedent ” - це слово або фраза до якої відноситься займенник. При читанні виникають багато проблем зв ’ язаних з цими невідповідностями. Наприклад, коли займенник відноситься більш, ніж до одного слова або однієї фрази.

4 Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? nTnThe machines can process the family of parts, ensuring that it reaches full capacity. nRnRevised: Capable of processing the family of parts, the machines reach full capacity.

5 nAnAll parts have the same transportation costs, which limits the effectiveness of traditional approaches. nRnRevised: All parts have the same transportation costs, thus limiting the effectiveness of traditional approaches.

6 nTnThe department chairman told the research assistant that she needed to perform the simulations in the event that the experiment fails. nRnRevised: The department chairman told the research assistant, "You need to perform the simulations in the event that the experiment fails."

7 nDnDeterioration is set to a constant fraction of the stock level, which implies that shortages are not permitted and the demand rate is assumed to decrease exponentially. nRnRevised: The fact that deterioration is set to a constant fraction of the stock level implies that shortages are not permitted and the demand rate is assumed to decrease exponentially.

8 nWnWhen a machine is assigned to a manufacturing cell, it attempts to reduce the total cost. nRnRevised: When assigned to a manufacturing cell, a machine attempts to reduce the total cost.

9 nTnThe posterior objective concentrates on balancing intracell and intercell machine loadings, which allows us to formulate the cell formation problem as follows. nRnRevised: The fact that the posterior objective concentrates on balancing intracell and intercell machine loadings allows us to formulate the cell formation problem as follows.

10 nFnFactors C, D, F, G and H significantly affect the response average. This indicates that F can be adjusted based on the target value. nRnRevised: Factors C, D, F, G and H significantly affect the response average. This finding (observation, occurrence, phenomenon, event) indicates that F can be adjusted based on the target value.

11 nYnYou should maintain a constant cutting speed even though the effective diameter of the cutting changes during machining. nRnRevised: A constant cutting speed should be maintained even though the effective diameter of the cutting changes during machining.

12 nInIn most previous investigations, they do not consider the simultaneous effects of deterioration and inflation. nRnRevised: Most previous investigations do not consider the simultaneous effects of deterioration and inflation.

13 nAnA numerical example demonstrates the effectiveness of the proposed method, which further indicates that the total system cost will be incorrectly estimated if the deteriorating effect and/or inflationary effect are neglected. nRnRevised: A numerical example demonstrates the effectiveness of the proposed method, further indicating that the total system cost will be incorrectly estimated if the deteriorating effect and/or inflationary effect are neglected.


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