1. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Proof Reading and Upgrading. Today’s Lesson Objectives: To revisit the skills of Proof Reading. To extend vocabulary using a Thesaurus

2. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Upgrade the following opening sentence by selecting at least two words and replacing them. I look back and think that there was no way that I was ever going to get away with it.

3. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Introduction to Setting – Spot the punctuation errors. The rain splattered in tiny spots in front of my eyes causing me to squint to see through the windscreen it had been a long day far too long and I was beyond tired now my feet ached uncomfortably in shoes that had become tighter and tighter as the day had progressed I looked out of the window as the clouds rolled above me threatening to break out into thunder at any second all I wanted was to get home On your piece of paper – identify where the punctuation should go – you have 5 minutes

4. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Punctuation Kung Fu We’re going to have an action for every piece of Punctuation.

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11. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Let’s try out the moves! 5

12. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Introduction to Setting – Spot the punctuation errors. The rain splattered in tiny spots in front of my eyes causing me to squint to see through the windscreen it had been a long day far too long and I was beyond tired now my feet ached uncomfortably in shoes that had become tighter and tighter as the day had progressed I looked out of the window as the clouds rolled above me threatening to break out into thunder at any second all I wanted was to get home Using your kung fu actions – you’re going to show me where you think they should go!

13. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Introduction to Setting – Spot the punctuation errors. The rain splattered in tiny spots in front of my eyes, causing me to squint to see through the windscreen. It had been a long day. Far too long! And I was beyond tired now. My feet ached uncomfortably in shoes that had become tighter and tighter as the day had progressed. I looked out of the window as the clouds rolled above me, threatening to break out into thunder at any second. All I wanted was to get home! Using your kung fu actions – you’re going to show me where they actually are now!

14. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Over to you….. With your new knowledge of punctuation and vocabulary – look at the beginning of your partner’s story. Check their punctuation. Upgrade their vocabulary. Be prepared to come back and tell the group at least one thing that you have changed.

15. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High Proof Reading and Upgrading. Today’s Lesson Objectives: To revisit the skills of Proof Reading. To extend vocabulary using a Thesaurus

16. M. Rathor Chapel en le Frith High The rain splattered in tiny spots in front of my eyes causing me to squint to see through the windscreen it had been a long day far too long and I was beyond tired now my feet ached uncomfortably in shoes that had become tighter and tighter as the day had progressed I looked out of the window as the clouds rolled above me threatening to break out into thunder at any second all I wanted was to get home