1. Stop motion animation evaluation

2. transformers Who do you think the target audience is? What kind of Genre do you think this is? Do you understand the storyline? Do the characters look different? Are you a fan of transformers? Do you know or have any feelings for the character How do you feel about the installation? How do you think I can improve?

3. Installation photographs

4. Focus group My focus group thought that my animation wasn’t as focused on story as I had hoped They also thought I could have created a better set And a few people felt I could have made the animation a bit smoother

5. feedback Target audience 7/10 knew my target audience Genre 9/10 knew my genre Storyline 5/10 understood the storyline Main character 8/10 knew who the main characters were Smooth 6/10 felt the animation was smooth Installation 7/10 liked my installation Improvements 9/10 felt it could be improved

6. evaluation I created my audience response with a questionnaire asking them the previous questions from how they felt about the characters to how easy it was to follow the storyline, the most effective responses I asked questions to them after they watched the film which unfortunately went unrecorded however these were more useful than a simple yes or no. My genre was action so the channels I was looking at for inspiration was cartoon network, this is the channel the current transformers, this is shown as there is no blood and gore and they can relate characters in the show to the ones in my animation

7. The style of mine is much like all fan made transformers shorts, as this is the easiest cheapest way of recreating the beloved series, however this style was a lot harder than I had anticipated. My narrative was a lot weaker than I had thought, due to the feedback received I became aware that due to the lack of speech trying to convey a plot was hard, luckily some people did understand the gist of it and could tell the basic plot of the story of optimus and megatrons ever raging war

8. My characters where iconic enough that they could be recognised instantly and every knew who the main two characters where but I think I could have solidified this by having an introduction. My animation techniques however, the animation came out in mine and some of my audiences opinion very rough and lacking any smoothness however over the course of creating the animation I believe that I have got a lot better and animating and in the future I will be able to do a better job, one scene I wish I could film again was the hand with the knife scene in the future I will remember that even when zooming this needs to be done smoothly and can not be an instant transition, no matter how fast paced the animation

9. Action plan I could improve my animation by creating a story that’s not only easier to understand but by also creating more developed characters so that there is more to tell, I feel that I could also have improved the set so it had a background that fits so that I would not have as much trouble as when I was editing