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By: Morgan, Anita, Abbey
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Summary The author: Lucy and Stephan Hawking George meets Annie and Eric while trying to find his pet pig. Eric enlightens George and Annie about the wonders of space. during an adventure Reeper, an evil scientist, interferes with their fun. He wants to steal Eric’s prize possession, the smartest computer in the world. Will George and Annie be able to keep Reeper away in order to get Eric back from his adventure The most Wretched Book
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Award Given Our award given to this book is the most wretched book. The most Wretched Book Most Wretched Book Wretched: miserable, pitiable
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Too Predictable o You can see what is going to happen before it happens. o “The hall burst into applause as everyone rose to his or her feet…” o It is easy to tell what is going to happen next o “The figure in the space suit followed George inside.” o Annie was the only one in the book at that time that would do that. o Not only predictable, but it is also has too many facts.
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Too Many Facts It distracts the reader from the main story At the least there are 3 pages of facts. It is supposed to have some facts, but not so many that it distracts the reader. “In 1996, passing within 9.4 million miles of the Earth…” There are facts everywhere They are also distracting because they don’t have anything to do with what was going on in the story. “ What are we going to do when the door opens?” “Haylie's comet…” The 2 quotes have nothing to do each other. It confuses the reader when the author switches to a different topics.
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