1. Guided Writing Jing Ye Senior High School Class 10 Senior 3 2008. 12. 17 STELLA EASY 易音

2. 请简单描述你参加过的一次志愿者活动， 及此次活动的意义。 Closely related to the topic ? Any grammatical mistake ? Structure complete ?

3. Nowadays, more and more volunteers are playing an important role in our society. They take care of sick old people, homeless children and help keep the traffic under control. As to me, I have quite a few experiences. I used to go to the orphanage in my neighborhood once a month and help do housework for those old men. Yet, I will never forget my experience during the 2007 Special Olympics held in shanghai. I will keep it in mind forever. Para A

4. Tips: don’t write unrelated and repeated information

5. When I worked there, I helped to translate Chinese for those foreign athletes. It is my main task. I told them our Chinese traditions and customs. I taught them some simple Chinese words such as “chifan” and “sanbu”. These children were mentally- disabled. They were frank and honest and I found myself relaxed with them. which though, which Though these children were mentally -disabled, they not only, but also I not only told them our Chinese traditions and customs but also taught them some simple Chinese words such as “chifan” and “sanbu”. Para B

6. When I worked there, I helped to translate Chinese for those foreign athletes, which is my main task. I not only told them our Chinese traditions and customs but also taught them some simple Chinese words such as “chifan” and “sanbu”. Though these children were mentally-disabled. They were frank and honest and I found myself relaxed with them. PRACTICE

7. Tips: don’t write unrelated and repeated information use different sentence patterns

8. That unforgettable experience truly impresses me greatly. I have benefited a lot from it. have learnt that responsibility means trying your best Firstly, I to do things well. Para C

9. Tips: don’t write unrelated and repeated information use different sentence patterns use supporting sentences

10. It is necessary to be a volunteer. I have now realized that the activity of volunteer should be encouraged because it is our duty to help those who need help badly. At that time, our society will become better. From the above, we can find it is too necessary to be a volunteer. You are happy and you are getting reward also. Everyone should try to act as volunteers. Please give your heart to those needing it so much. Please spare a little of your love and the world will be so warm. At that time, you will feel surrounded by warmth of people and how wonderful it is. Para D

11. Tips: don’t write unrelated and repeated information use different sentence patterns use supporting sentences have a complete structure of B + B + E

12. 政府已经针对当今的交通情况采取了 一些措施， 但是仍不如人意。请你就 这一情况谈谈你的看法， 并提出你的 建议。

13. Assignments: Polish this essay with the tips learnt