1. EAP_2 Week _11

2. Essay 6 feedback Answer the question If you change the question in the assessment You will lose marks Case study = an actual example from real life From page 116 These give details, data Or one you know But it must also give details, data Or it will not be as good Short-term and long-term solutions for one problem

3. Language points There are a lot of places suffering from disasters which are caused by global human activities. There are a lot of places which suffer from disasters caused by global human activities. Once an earthquake has occurred, the most important short-term strategy is protecting oneself. Since it is not easy to recover from earthquakes, long-term solutions are also necessary. Since recovery from earthquakes is not easy, long-term solutions are also necessary.

4. Language points Not only people but also animals and plants cannot live comfortably because of global warming The main purpose of this report is to show short- and long-term solutions (= the ‘infinitive of purpose’) In March 2011, a gigantic earthquake attacked Eastern Japan. For example, since the earthquake in Chile in 2010, governments and population are / have been more prepared to face huge earthquakes than before. For example, after the earthquake in Chile in 2010, governments and population were been more prepared to face huge earthquakes than before.

5. One (more formal) / You (less formal) can get free tourist maps from some Edinburgh shops.

6. Shiver Tremble / shudder

7. Quoting from sayings Horace said a picture was like ‘a poem without words’. Bradbury suggested that thought was ‘the enemy of creativity’. Matisse argued that ‘creativity takes courage’. De Bono thought that in order to be creative we should go against old habits to help us see things differently. Hock implied that you can become creative by not thinking about too many things. Adams suggested that one can be creative by allowing oneself mistakes.

8. Homework: page 170 Choose 5. Write them again, quoting some of each one, with good reporting verbs According to Alice Rawsthorn, fashion, unlike art, only gives us “the headlines of history”. Bill Shankly thought that football was “much more important” than a matter of life or death. Zandra Rhodes believed that clothes could have “the same amount of artistic expression” as other art forms. According to Denis Dutton, cooking doesn’t have the same “transmission of human emotion” as real art. Ripert defined cooking as mixing creativity with craft “at the highest level”.

9. Reference list Oblack R. (2015) Citation According to Oblack (2015) / Oblack (2015) claims, states, argues that…..

10. Extreme Weather As IWA Water Wiki (2009) explains, a flash flood covers a relatively small area, but this means the water can be very high, which is why the flood is so dangerous. It is able to lift heavy objects like cars, because of its “sudden onset and high travelling speed”. Oblack (2015) claims that Michigan is the safest place in the USA for extreme weather. She points out that it has only had up to 3 events causing 1 billion dollars’ worth of damage, which is much less than for other states.

11. Reference list IWA Water Wiki (2009, 1 st Sept.,) Flood Types Retrieved from http://www.iwawaterwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Articles/FloodTypesInu ndationTypes Oblack R.(2015) Billion Dollar Storms Retrieved from http://weather.about.com/od/hurricanes/qt/katrina2yr.htm

12. Extreme weather text (with citations and references) One text = one reference list Direct quotes – not too long If not sure – study my model answer

13. Extreme weather text (with citations and references) There are several types of floods which happen /happening to damage our environment Compared with other cities in the USA, less severe weather occurs in Michigan Michigan seems to be the safest place to live to avoid any type of serious weather. Oblack (2015) claims that each storm costs billions of dollars In many cases, floods are additionally influenced by human activities. Even if the amount of water is large, it can be dangerous

14. The Scream is the popular name given to each of four paintings by the artists Edvard Munch who painted them between 1893 and 1910. The pictures show a figure against a landscape with a red sky. The National Gallery Oslo holds one painting, the Munch Museum holds two more, and the fourth sold for $119m at Sotheby’s on 2 May 2012. To explain the picture, the artist wrote in his diary: “One evening I felt tired and ill. I stopped and looked out over the sea – the sun was setting and the clouds were turning blood red. I sensed a scream passing through nature; it seemed to me that I heard it.

15. review test_6 It is important to prepare for natural disasters It is surprising that more people didn’t know about the tsunami It is worth remembering that earthquakes can happen at any time It is a good idea to prepare for emergencies It is a sad fact that many homes were destroyed in the hurricane

16. ˈanalysing risks: risk anˈalysis protecting from floods: flood protection

17. Australia is a very hot country. Therefore there can be drought Australia is a very hot country. For example, there can be drought. Australia is a very hot country. This means there can be drought 1.There can be drought in Australia, because it is a very hot country. 2.Because it is a very hot country, there can be drought in Australia. 3.Because Australia is a very hot country, there can be drought.

18. A coherent paragraph Because some cars are rare and beautiful, they can have some similarities with fine art. A 1962 Ferrari GTO, for example, a classic car, made $35 million in a sale in 2012. According to some, although classic cars are not always a practical means of transport, they have a personality. These people describe their feelings towards their cars as ‘love’.

19. “I’m playing all the right notes, but not necessarily in the right order”