1. Be Prepared … 1) Grab a PAPER from the table 2) HAVE A TEXTBOOK
3) 1st point and 2nd point on graphic organizer done

2. What was a quality of the first test you liked?
Was there an aspect of the test you struggled with?

3. What you did well / to improve next time
STRONG TOPIC SENTENCES:
WHICH IS BETTER & WHY?
A: The Pilgrims had good ideas about government.
B: Creating the Mayflower Compact was a brilliant starting point for the Pilgrim’s government and the new English colony will create a similar document.

4. Improve this good INTRO:
The Plymouth Colony was the most affluent and strongest of the two first English colonies. Without a doubt, the Plymouth colony is the model colony for future colonies. The Plymouth colony set a solid foundation for the U.S. Constitution, as well as the democracy that defines America as free. The Plymouth colony is the strongest colony to model future colonies after because Plymouth had a strong relationship with the natives, the Mayflower Compact, and strong leadership.
The Plymouth Colony was the most affluent and strongest of the two first English colonies. Without a doubt, the Plymouth colony is the model colony for future colonies. This colony had a strong relationship with the native, the Mayflower Compact, and strong leadership. The Plymouth colony set a solid foundation for the U.S. Constitution, as well as the democracy that defines America as free. The Plymouth colony is the strongest colony to model future colonies after.

5. OVERUSE OF THE WORD … “THING”
Q: Making peace was one of the best things the Pilgrims did.
A: Making peace was one of the best decisions the Pilgrims made.

6. 4/4 Excellent Writing Included:
1: Any writer that mentions Squanto, Somoset, Wamponag, etc. is on his/her way to a strong essay.
2: Concluding sentences:
“Surely, without the natives, the Pilgrims would have starved to death.”
3: Advanced Transitions:
“The Mayflower Compact was another strong attribute of the Plymouth colony.”

7. Do you have any questions before we move on?
How your essay will improve next time:
1: No 1st Person
2: Counterpoint DEFENDS more than ATTACKS
3: Independent Research
Do you have any questions before we move on?

8. THESIS = Aaron Rodgers is the best Quarterback in the NFL, because he is at the prime of his career, he is fast, and he has thrown four touchdowns for every interception.

9. Aaron Rodgers is the best quarterback in the NFL
Aaron Rodgers is the best quarterback in the NFL. He is the starting quarterback for the Green Bay Packers. He Has been in the league for 10 years. Aaron Rodgers is the best Quarterback in the NFL, because he is at the prime of his career, he is fast, and he has thrown four touchdowns for every interception.

10. Aaron Rodgers is in the prime of his career
Aaron Rodgers is in the prime of his career. He is only 31 years old, therefore he has about another 8-9 years left to play. In the ten years he has played in the NFL he has amassed 28,578 passing yards and has won a Superbowl. Those numbers can easily be doubled by the end of his career if he keeps playing at his current pace, especially since he has only been a starter for 6 years. He has a great arm, but great legs as well.

11. For a quarterback, Aaron Rodgers is fast. He ran a 4
For a quarterback, Aaron Rodgers is fast. He ran a 4.71 second forty yard dash at the combine. He has rushed for 1831 yards. He has scored 20 rushing touchdowns. His combination of passing and running abilities has made him the one of the most efficient quarterbacks of all time. These abilities translate to a stat record.

12. Aaron Rodgers has the best touchdown to interception ratio of all time, for passers throwing over 200 touchdowns. Aaron Rodgers, including the postseason, has thrown 249 passing touchdowns, while only throwing 64 interceptions. This estimates to a 4:1 touchdown to interception ratio. He also has the lowest career interception percentage in the NFL. Aaron Rodgers competes with other top contenders with great career stats.

13. A lot of people will argue that there are other Quarterbacks that are better than Aaron Rodgers. Tom Brady is one quarterback that a lot of people would argue is better than Aaron Rodgers. Tom Brady has 4 Super Bowl rings. Tom Brady also has 54,016 passing yards. Tom Brady also, has a career passer efficiency rating of However, Aaron Rodgers has more than half of all of those stat categories and is on pace to break all of those records in 9-10 years, especially because he has a career passer efficiency rating of

14. Aaron Rodgers is the best quarterback in the NFL
Aaron Rodgers is the best quarterback in the NFL. He is at the prime of his career, he is fast, and he has a 4:1 touchdown to interception ratio.

15. BACKGROUND INFORMATION
PATRIOTS
LOYALISTS
BACKGROUND INFORMATION
PREVIEW
THESIS
EXPLAIN & EXPAND
AGAINST
REFUTE

16. BACKGROUND INFORMATION
JAMESTOWN
1607
PLYMOUTH
1620
BACKGROUND INFORMATION
PREVIEW
THESIS
EXPLAIN & EXPAND
AGAINST
REFUTE

17. Loyalist or Patriot?