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1 Respond to my marking in green pen: Correct any SPaG errors
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. Respond to my marking in green pen: Correct any SPaG errors Write a detailed response to my pink task Write yourself some targets that will improve your next anthology response

2 Poetry Anthology: improving our analysis
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. Tuesday 28th March Poetry Anthology: improving our analysis Write the key words in the margin.

3 What do I mean by ‘developing’ language analysis?
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. You are brilliant at: Showing off your understanding of the poems Exploring the author’s intentions Weaving context into your response Embedding quotations We need to work on: Developing language analysis Using the poet’s name throughout our responses Ensuring we explore BOTH poems in detail Writing more in timed conditions What do I mean by ‘developing’ language analysis?

4 Improving our response
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. Improving our response We are now going to complete some timed writing tasks. These will help you develop both your analysis and writing speed.

5 ‘At the corner, the first bomb of the morning shattered the stones.’
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. ‘At the corner, the first bomb of the morning shattered the stones.’ (War Photographer) What does this quotation suggest about war? Consider: key words, imagery, language devices, connotations, the impact on the reader. You have 5 minutes.

6 What does this quotation suggest about war?
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. ‘The poignant misery of dawn begins to grow… We only know war lasts, rain soaks, and clouds sag stormy.’ (Exposure) What does this quotation suggest about war? Consider: key words, imagery, language devices, connotations, the impact on the reader. You have 5 minutes.

7 How do Owen and Satyamurti present the consequences of war?
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. How do Owen and Satyamurti present the consequences of war? Now compare how the two poets present war. Explore the writer’s intentions and the message each poem presents. Include context. You have 5 minutes.

8 Extract from The Prelude by William Wordsworth
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. Extract from The Prelude by William Wordsworth Write down anything you remember about the poem.

9 We are now going to re-visit the context for the poem.
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. We are now going to re-visit the context for the poem. Add to your notes in green pen.

10 His work was part of a collection called Lyrical Ballads.
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. William Wordsworth ( ) is one of the most famous poets in the history of English Literature. Wordsworth was a key player in the Romantic Movement. Romantic poets were strongly influenced by nature and God as an omniscient power. He was born in the Lake District and his birthplace had a huge influence on his writing. Growing up Wordsworth spent time with his grandparents who lived in nearby Penrith, an even more scenic part of the country. His work was part of a collection called Lyrical Ballads. Wordsworth was made Poet Laureate (the Queen's poet) in 1843. The poem The Prelude is an autobiographical epic poem which details parts of his formative (teenage) years and his journey from boy to man; the full version is much longer – this is only an extract.

11 Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. This poem explores Wordsworth’s journey into adulthood, using nature to portray his changing perception of the world. Often children are not aware of the dangers of the world until one event or another opens their eyes to the reality that the world can actually be a dangerous place. Wordsworth makes this idea clear; in a few short lines, he transformed from a fearless, carefree boy, to an adult who was aware of the realities of the dangerous world in which he lived. This realization stayed with him for the rest of his days, and he was never able to see the world in the light of childhood again.

12 The form and structure of each poem (20 marks)
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. Look at the poem The Prelude and one other poem from the anthology. Compare how nature is presented. Consider: The poet’s message Context The language used The form and structure of each poem (20 marks)

13 Poet’s message/context:
What type of conflict is being portrayed? What is the purpose of each poem? Why were they written? What is the poet’s message/view? Have you weaved in relevant context for each poem? Form and structure: What type of poem is it? Whose viewpoint is it from? Why is this important? Are the poems written in stanzas? Why? How does the poem start/end? Does the mood change? Where? Why? Does the poem use enjambment? Why? Can you make a relevant comment about the rhythm/rhyme scheme? Language analysis: What are the key words in each poem? Why are they important? What is the semantic field? (There is a noticeable semantic field of….) What different types of imagery are used in the poem? Why? What can we say about connotations of the imagery in each poem? What language devices are used by each poet? Why? How is punctuation used? Why is it important? What is the effect on the reader? How do they make the reader feel? Analytical verbs: implies, suggests, shows, demonstrates, highlights, reveals, portrays, signifies, symbolises, illustrates, Comparative phrases: similarly, on the other hand…, contrastingly, however, furthermore, this is mirrored in…., whereas, this is contrasted in….

14 What do you need to include? How should you structure your response?
Lesson Objectives: AO2 – Analyse language, form and structure in two poems. AO3 – Link poems to their context. Key Words: context analysis independent Success Criteria: Write a detailed DIRT response. Complete timed responses to a series of questions. Revise context for The Prelude. Write an independent anthology response. Write a short metacognitive letter. In green pen, write yourself a short letter explaining how to be successful when approaching the anthology poetry section of the exam. What do you need to include? How should you structure your response? What are you good at? What do you need to improve on?


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