1. Writing with Appositives
An appositive is a noun that further describes a preceding noun :
Before: The beaver swims and builds dams.
After: The beaver, a semi-aquatic rodent, swims and builds dams.
How are commas used with appositives?

2. To create a more vibrant, clear sentence…
Add more detail to your appositive, creating an appositive phrase:
The beaver, a semi-aquatic rodent applauded for its engineering feats, swims and builds dams.

3. From Night, by Elie Wiesel:
Suddenly the gate opened, and Stern, a former tradesman who had become a policeman, came in and took my father aside. Despite the gathering dusk, I saw my father turn pale.

4. Student examples:
Ramadan, a time of fasting, began when Shabanu visited the village of Mehrapur.
Summer days without my best friend, a champion lawn bowler, are miserable.
I think adopting a cat, a warm fluffy ball of fur, would complete our home.

5. You’re the Subject With Appositives
Write three sentences with appositives that begin with your name. Here are some examples:
Mrs. Nelson, a seventh grade teacher, works on weekends to improve her students’ learning.
Mrs. Nelson, a friend to all children, has three fabulous sons of her own.
Mrs. Nelson, an avid runner, wishes she could catch up to Mrs. Jez.
*Don’t forget commas!
You’re the Subject With Appositives

6. Add Appositives to These Sentences
Washington State, _____________________________, borders Oregon, Idaho, and Canada.
Broccoli, _____________________________, provides nutrients that build strong bones.
Her little brother, __________________________, annoys me when I visit.

7. Your turn: Look at the following photograph
Determine the first noun you will use
Think of a second noun or noun phrase to enhance the first one
Complete your vivid sentence
Use commas correctly
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8. Instructor: Insert your photo here
Determine the first noun you will use
Think of a second noun or noun phrase to enhance the first one
Complete your vivid sentence
Use commas correctly