1. How will my Essay be graded?

2. Focus
Your argument/thesis/central claim is the last sentence in your introduction.
Your thesis clearly states your position on the topic (pro or con).
Example:
Schools should continue using the traditional calendar and not a year- round schedule (because it has no positive effects on education, it adds to costs, and it disrupts the long-awaited summer vacation).

3. Organization/Structure
Introduction clearly introduces your topic to the reader. What is the issue? What is this a “constitutional issue”?
Conclusion starts with your argument/thesis sentence and it makes sense.
Transitions make it sound nice.
Ideas are logical.

4. Example – Introduce the topic
Every year, millions of American children count down the school days before Summer Vacation. Around the country, students prepare for two and a half month of carefree time to do as they please. But a growing number of school worldwide are transitioning to a year-round school model missing Summer Vacation. The year round school model comes with its own benefits and drawbacks, but it’s not worth the risk. Schools should continue using the traditional calendar and not a year-round schedule because it has no positive effects on education, it adds to costs, and it disrupts the long-awaited summer vacation.

5. Example - Conclusion
It is evident that year-round schooling is not the best option for the school calendar. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the traditional school year. Why change something that works so well? The final bell rings. Let’s make sure this bell means that the “real” summer vacation has come.

6. Example – Transitions and Logical Ideas
Contrary to the well-accepted belief, year-round schooling has no constructive impact on education. For example, most year-round schedules use the method: 45 days of school followed by 15 days off. Because of this, there are many first and last days of school. All those transitions disrupt the learning process. Also, there is no evidence of higher test scores. Due to that, many schools that change to year-round schedules end up switching back. In fact, according to data collected by the National Education Association, since 1980, 95 percent of schools that tried the year-round schedule changed back to a traditional calendar. Clearly, changing to year-round schooling does not help students; therefore, why is the change necessary?

7. Evidence/Support You have enough. It’s related to your claim.
Source information is included.

8. Example - Evidence
An important part of a child’s life is summertime. With year- round schedules, students would hardly have any time to relax. During the 15-day breaks, they would be thinking about their quick return to school. It would also be difficult to coordinate family vacations with parents’ work schedules. Similarly, children would not be able to go to most summer camps. One expert, Dr. Peter Scales, says, “The biggest plus of camp is that camps help young people discover and explore their talents, interests, and values. Most schools don’t satisfy all these needs. Kids who have these kinds of [camp] experiences end up being healthier and have fewer problems” (Student). Obviously, the summer is crucial to a child’s learning and development. Why should this invaluable part of a young person’s life be taken away?

9. Analysis/Reasoning Reasoning connects the evidence to the claim.
Reasoning is valid (true).
Shows you understand your topic.

10. Example – Analysis/Reasoning
Like any other facility, keeping a school open requires a great deal of money. Keeping school open in the middle of summer requires air conditioning, and that adds significantly to the school’s expenses. If a school district wants to save money, then a two and a half month break during the Summer can be a great opportunity to save, especially if it’s during the hottest month of the year. Finally, teachers must be paid for all the weeks they are working, so districts would be required to direct more funds to their teachers’ paychecks. If teachers are being paid more, then other services may be cut due to lack of funds. Furthermore, It’s important to remember that teachers are paid with some tax payer money. So even though they might enjoy the pay bump, it would have the opposite effect on the tax payers.

11. Example - Citation
 “Student Model: Summer: 15 Days or 2 1/2 Months?” K-12 Thoughtful Learning, Thoughtful Learning, 7 Aug. 2015, k12.thoughtfullearni ng.com/studentmodels/summer-15-days-or-2-12-months. Accessed 19 Apr