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Why was the issue cited a cause?
Imperialism in Africa caused WWI because competition in Africa forced nations to create alliances that needed to be honored when Ferdinand was assassinated.

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Why was the issue cited a cause?
Imperialism in Africa caused WWI because competition in Africa forced nations to create alliances that needed to be honored when Ferdinand was assassinated.

9. What Needs to be Improved A list from B3 or 3B
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