1. How to write an Introductory paragraph
“One today is worth two tomorrows.” Ben Franklin
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Spring 2002

2. When you write an introductory paragraph, keep in mind that . . .
Writing an introductory paragraph is like greeting someone. The paragraph should be short and to the point like saying, “Hello!”
Also, you don’t want to get into the meat of the essay. Simply give the audience a concise idea of your essay’s purpose.
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Spring 2002

3. Remember that the introductory paragraph . . .
Is the most important paragraph of the essay
Must be at least words long or three-five sentences minimum
Needs to do several things
Follow AIRS format:
Attract readers attention
Identify the author and title of article (s)
Restate prompt in your own words
State the thesis
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Even though there are several ways to begin an essay, I recommended that you choose one particular method and perfect it. Why?
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5. Because if you keep using the same method, you will . . .
Become an expert in this particular method.
Moreover, if you already know how you will begin your essay, you will be more prepared, relaxed, and confident.
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6. Let us consider different types of attention grabbers . . .(A) in AIRS
General statement introduction
Quotation introduction
Anecdote
Surprise
There are other ways to begin an introductory paragraph, but these three ways will do for now.
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Spring 2002

7. Examples of general statement introduction
Almost every time that you turn on the television you will find a number of shows which are extremely violent.
Many public schools have decided that their students should use uniforms.
In the United States of America the public burning of our flag has become a common sight.
(These are three different example of how you can begin your paragraph. If you will notice in the first sentence you simply introduce the topic. You do not state your thesis yet.)
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Spring 2002

8. Quotation introduction
A recent article in Time magazine states that the viewing of extremely violent television shows is the number one cause of violence in our inner cities.
John F. Kennedy once said, "Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.”
“I have a Dream” is one of the most recognized sentences in the world.
( You can begin an essay by providing some information from a magazine or newspaper you might have read. This introduction is a bit more difficult to write, but just as effective as the other ones.)
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Spring 2002

9. Ancedote (setting the scene)
This is a mini narrative where you describe something generally.
Example:
Imagine being in the middle of the woods, scared for your life. You hear the dogs searching and barking. You know if any of your passengers move, you will be found.
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Surprise Statement
This is a statement that sounds so out of context the reader has to keep reading to figure out where you are going with it and what you mean.
Example:
Did you know that Canada is pink?
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11. Next step: Introduce Author and Article (I) in AIRS
The next sentence in your introductory paragraph needs to include the author and title of the text. If there are two articles, you need to put both in.
Remember that article titles get put in quotes – not underlined!!
“A Woman Called Moses” by Karen Sims…
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12. Restate the prompt in your own words (R) in AIRS
Using words used in the prompt – restate the prompt.
Can combine it with the author and title sentence.
Example:
“A Woman Called Moses” by Karen Sims conveys several central ideas.
“Trash: Why Recycle” by Mark Jones argues the point of view that recycling is not necessary.
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13. State your Thesis (S) in AIRS
The thesis should be the last sentence in your introductory paragraphs.
It is – technically- is something that you can prove through evidence you just read
If it is a FACT – it is not a thesis. (It has to be proven)
It is the topic of your essay and what you are saying about the topic.
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Thesis Examples
NO:
The sun is 7.5 million miles away from Earth
Harriet Tubman led 200 slaves to freedom.
Yes:
The author’s point of view is conveyed through….
One central idea in the article is that Harriet Tubman is a symbol of freedom.
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In the next three slides you will view completed introductory paragraphs.
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16. General statement introduction
Today smoking is an issue which is on everybody’s mind. Imagine opening a car door and the whole inside of the car is engulfed in a smokey haze. The article “The Side Effects of Smoking” by Susan Henry focuses on several central ideas. The whole country is divided on this issue. Some people believe that smoking should be banned everywhere while others are not so harsh. However, the central point is that tobacco should be outlawed because smoking endangers everyone’s health, pollutes the environment, and drains us of valuable energy.
Notice that the introduction has three parts. First, you introduce the topic. Then in one or two sentences you lead in to your position and reasons which is the third part, the thesis sentence. Also note that the thesis is stated in one sentence, both position and reasons.
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Spring 2002

17. Quotation introduction
John F. Kennedy once said, "Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.” In “Our Country is in Trouble” by Susan Johnson, the authors point of view is voiced by her word choice, examples and tone. Today's Americans have forgotten Kennedy's message. We expect our country to take care of us, but we are not taking care of our country.
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Final reminders !!!!
Be concise and to the point!
Do not go into too much detail!
At least 50 words minimum!
You must do four things . . .
attract readers attention
introduce author and title of text
restate prompt in own words
state your thesis
Created by José J. González, Jr.
Spring 2002