1. Essay Writing
Thesis or NOT??

2. Thesis Makes a historical defensible claim
Responds to ALL parts of the question
Found in introduction or conclusion
One or two sentences

3. Thesis Your opinion without saying “I”
Your answer to the question in 1-2 sentences
May contain a “roadmap” –or topics for discussion

4. A good thesis should: Make a stand on an issue—make a point
Be in the first paragraph
Outline a “plan of attack” or categories to be considered
Address the complexities of the question

5. Very many things lots of stuff Throughout history…
Words to AVOID
Very many things lots of stuff
Throughout history…
Also—things are never “good and bad”…..

6. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers

7. Many ways of their lives had changed since that period
Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
Many ways of their lives had changed since that period

8. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
The presence of technology improved American markets for the middle class who were purchasing the goods, while it became detrimental to the factory workers who had previously been producing the goods

9. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
However while many of these innovations raised the quality of life for middle class urban residents, it meant horrible conditions for the factory workers.

10. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
Technological innovations of the late 19th century and early 20th century impacted the lives of most American citizens.

11. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
Technology was beneficial in terms of time and quantity. It effected factory workers and Midwestern farmers in many ways. Technology effected everyone in many different ways, good and bad.

12. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
Both the two social classes Midwest farmers and middle class workers faced changes due to technological innovations some great and some bad

13. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
…some lives were greatly declined. For factory workers, life seemed to generally decline, but for middle class urban residents, their lives can be seen to not predominantly improve.

14. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
….No two groups were so much affected by this change as factory workers and farmers, who both witnessed a change in their work habits as well as position in society.

15. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
Although increased productivity should have been a good thing, it ended up hurting both factory workers and farmers by reducing skilled labor and deflating the value of crops and other products

16. Analyze the impact of technological innovations on the lives of TWO of the following groups. Confine your answer to the period : Factory workers Middle-class urban residents Midwestern farmers
The technological advancements of this time brought many gains to society, but these gains came at a great price to the workers and farmers of the nation

18. Analyze the responses of Franklin D
Analyze the responses of Franklin D. Roosevelt’s administration to the problems of the Great Depression. How effective were these responses? How did they change the role of the federal government?
Use the documents and your knowledge of the period to construct your essay

19. Thesis—yes or no?
The administration of FDR proved to be a very effective team in combating the problems of the Great Depression. By putting into use many new ideas and programs, the New Deal also worked to raise the power of the president and government in general while extending the expectations of the people…..

20. Thesis or not?
Armed with the New Deal plan of relief, recovery, and reform, FDR took office and passed some effective pieces of legislation that broadened the power of the federal government to help overcome the Great Depression

21. Thesis or not?
Although the New Deal was limited in its two-tier character, temporary reform, and little attention to minorities, the enlargement of the federal government was successful in mitigating the impact of the depression, establishing long-term reforms, and paving the way to understand how to address severe economic crises in the future….

22. Thesis or not?
…However, even as the federal government began to play a greater role in the lives of Americans, meaningful changes in living and working conditions came slowly

23. Thesis—Yes or No???
Franklin Roosevelt’s responses to the economic hardships of the Great Depression proved themselves to be effective in relieving the suffering of the American people. Also, the government subsequently underwent a renovation through FDR’s efforts

24. Thesis..Yes or No?
During FDR’s presidency, he proposed very many laws that came to be known as the New Deal

25. Thesis or not?
The New Deal dramatically changed the task of the federal government through its various programs, and although it did not completely fix the economy, it helped ease the suffering of the people and reformed many problems that had contributed to the Great Depression