1. The Iliad
5-paragraph essay

2. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Write it LAST.

3. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)

4. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone

5. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.

6. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading

7. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)

8. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title

9. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title
Summarize book

10. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title
Summarize book
Include main characters

11. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title
Summarize book
Include main characters
If the summary is more than 2-3 sentences, edit/condense writing and use concise language

12. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title
Summarize book
Include main characters
If the summary is more than 2-3 sentences, edit/condense writing and use concise language
Do not compliment the author

13. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Attention Grabber (1st sentence)
Be careful to keep in Academic Tone
Before using a quote, check with Mr. Brautigan.
Make the reader want to keep reading
Basic Summary of Book (2-3 sentences)
Introduce author and title
Summarize book
Include main characters
If the summary is more than 2-3 sentences, edit/condense writing and use concise language
Do not compliment the author
Transition Sentence ( 1 sentence)

14. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH

15. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)

16. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)
Must be arguable – not just a statement of fact

17. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)
Must be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Include “road map” of the essay

18. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)
Must be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Include “road map” of the essay
Include the 3 topics, in order, of the three body paragraphs

19. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)
Must be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Include “road map” of the essay
Include the 3 topics, in order, of the three body paragraphs
The Introduction Paragraph should be no more than six sentences in length.

20. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Thesis Statement (1 sentence)
Must be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Include “road map” of the essay
Include the 3 topics, in order, of the three body paragraphs
The Introduction Paragraph should be no more than six sentences in length.
Any questions??

21. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs

22. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)

23. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)

24. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)

25. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Transition (1 sentence)

26. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Transition (1 sentence)

27. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Transition (1 sentence)

28. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Transition (1 sentence)
Transition to next paragraph (1 sentence)

29. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
No more than 9 sentences!!
Claim (1 sentence)
Data (1 sentence)
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Transition (1 sentence)
Transition to next paragraph (1 sentence)

30. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs

31. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)

32. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact

33. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement

34. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)

35. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format

36. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?

37. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?
If more than 1-2 sentences, use ellipsis within quote

38. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?
If more than 1-2 sentences, use ellipsis within quote
Can be either a direct quote from a character, or a passage from the text

39. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?
If more than 1-2 sentences, use ellipsis within quote
Can be either a direct quote from a character, or a passage from the text
Embed – do not have a stand-alone quote

40. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?
If more than 1-2 sentences, use ellipsis within quote
Can be either a direct quote from a character, or a passage from the text
Embed – do not have a stand-alone quote
Lead into quote with plot

41. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Claim Sentence (1 sentence)
Should be arguable – not just a statement of fact
Be part of the thesis statement
Data (1-2 sentences)
Cite correctly in MLA format
Does it prove the claim?
If more than 1-2 sentences, use ellipsis within quote
Can be either a direct quote from a character, or a passage from the text
Embed – do not have a stand-alone quote
Lead into quote with plot
Avoid phrases like “It says”, or “Homer says”

42. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs

43. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Warrant (1-2 sentences)

44. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Do not summarize the data

45. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Do not summarize the data
Explain HOW the data proves the claim

46. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Do not summarize the data
Explain HOW the data proves the claim
Discuss WHY this data is significant to the story

47. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Warrant (1-2 sentences)
Do not summarize the data
Explain HOW the data proves the claim
Discuss WHY this data is significant to the story
Avoid phrases like “This quote shows” or “This proves that” or “This is significant because” – I promise I WILL TAKE OFF POINTS FOR THIS

48. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs

49. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph

50. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)

51. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)
One quote will be from your outside source

52. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)
One quote will be from your outside source
Use a transition sentence between the warrant from your first source before introducing your second source

53. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)
One quote will be from your outside source
Use a transition sentence between the warrant from your first source before introducing your second source
End each CDW paragraph with a transition sentence. The essay packet has a list provided of effective phrases to use.

54. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)
One quote will be from your outside source
Use a transition sentence between the warrant from your first source before introducing your second source
End each CDW paragraph with a transition sentence. The essay packet has a list provided of effective phrases to use.
Each CDW paragraph should be no more than 9 sentences.

55. Claim/Data/Warrant/Data/Warrant Paragraphs
Remember, you will have TWO quotes per body paragraph
One quote will be from your primary source (The Iliad)
One quote will be from your outside source
Use a transition sentence between the warrant from your first source before introducing your second source
End each CDW paragraph with a transition sentence. The essay packet has a list provided of effective phrases to use.
Each CDW paragraph should be no more than 9 sentences.
Any questions???

56. Conclusion Paragraph

57. Conclusion Paragraph
Restate thesis using different words

58. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)

59. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay

60. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments

61. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments
Final statement should leave the reader thinking

62. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments
Final statement should leave the reader thinking
Do not pose a question

63. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments
Final statement should leave the reader thinking
Do not pose a question
Avoid phrases such as “People say” or “In today’s society”

64. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments
Final statement should leave the reader thinking
Do not pose a question
Avoid phrases such as “People say” or “In today’s society”
The conclusion paragraph should be no more than 5 sentences.

65. Conclusion Paragraph Restate thesis using different words
Have all parts of the thesis represented (argument and all 3 topics)
Have a statement that effectively concludes the essay
Do not introduce any new concepts or arguments
Final statement should leave the reader thinking
Do not pose a question
Avoid phrases such as “People say” or “In today’s society”
The conclusion paragraph should be no more than 5 sentences.
Any questions???

66. Works Cited

67. Works Cited
Put in alphabetical order

68. Works Cited
Put in alphabetical order
MLA format

69. Works Cited Put in alphabetical order MLA format
Must include at least 3 sources – 2 outside sources, and primary source (The Iliad)

70. Works Cited Put in alphabetical order MLA format
Must include at least 3 sources – 2 outside sources, and primary source (The Iliad)
IMPORTANT: If a Works Cited page is not submitted, the paper is considered plagiarized. The paper will be handed back and is considered late until one is submitted with the final draft.

71. Works Cited Put in alphabetical order MLA format
Must include at least 3 sources – 2 outside sources, and primary source (The Iliad)
IMPORTANT: If a Works Cited page is not submitted, the paper is considered plagiarized. The paper will be handed back and is considered late until one is submitted with the final draft.
Any questions???