1. How to Write Your Introduction Paragraph

2. Introduction Paragraph = Tornado
This is your attention grabber.
“Holy Crap! Look at the crazy cloud!”
This is your brief explanation of what you will be talking about or, in this case, what is going on.
“There’s a weird funnel that looks like a tornado.”
This is your thesis, where you hit
your point home.
“Yup, that’s a tornado alright.”

3. The 3 Steps to Writing Your Introduction
Step 1: Grab you readers attention with a general statement about your topic. This is the HOOK.
Step 2: Briefly explain in 2‐5 sentences what the essay will be about by providing relevant background information.
Step 3: End your introduction with a strong thesis statement that tells your reader what you intend to prove to him or her about your topic.

4. Step 1: Hook Your Reader 1. Dialogue 2. Question 3. Vivid Description
Grab your reader’s attention
with a general statement
about the topic.
Remember you have 4 ways to
do this:
1. Dialogue
2. Question
3. Vivid Description
4. Interesting Fact
You want your reader to look like this

5. Explain What You Are Talking About
Step 2:
Explain What You Are Talking About
Briefly explain in 2-5 sentences what the essay will be

6. Step 3: Write Your Thesis Statement
You’ve already done this!!

7. Things to AVOID
You should avoid using statements like, “This essay will discuss…” or “I’m going to write about…”.
AVOID statements that are too broad, too specific, or to vague.

8. Thesis Model Introduction Paragraph Brief Explanation Hook
Smoking‐related diseases
cause an estimated 440,000
American deaths each year.
Even with facts like these, the
whole country is divided on this
issue. Some people believe that
smoking should be banned
everywhere while others are not
so harsh. However,
tobacco should be
outlawed because smoking
endangers everyone’s health,
pollutes the environment, and
drains us of valuable energy.
Hook
(Interesting Fact)
Brief Explanation
(Leads into thesis)
Thesis
(What you will be proving)

9. Thesis Another Model Introduction Paragraph Brief Explanation Hook
Have you ever noticed that Athens is a popular name for cities? All cities that are named Athens are named after the Greek goddess Athena. The daughter of Zeus, Athena is the goddess of wisdom, just wars, and architecture. She is the best all-around Greek mythology character because she is very wise, a great tactician, and she only helps fight justified wars.
Hook
(Thought-provoking question)
Brief Explanation
(Leads into thesis)
Thesis
(What you will be proving)

10. Another Model Introduction Paragraph
Imagine the jungle surrounds you and one of the most talented hunters in the world is pursuing you; would you stand your ground? In Richard Connell’s short story “The Most Dangerous Game,” that is exactly what Rainsford does. Stranded on Ship trap Island, Rainsford must play hunter General Zaroff’s game, where Zaroff tries to hunt Rainsford down like an animal. Rainsford is one of the bravest characters in literature because he is not easily frightened, he jumps into the sea, and he defeats Zaroff by outsmarting him.
Hook
(Vivid Description/Thought-provoking question)
Brief Explanation
(Leads into thesis)
Thesis
(What you will be proving)

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