1. Charlie and the chocolate factory
By rayeanna charlesworth

2. Charlie and the chocolate factory
Once there was this boy called James and he lived with his grandfather and dad they were very rich. James had this dream that he would spend time at the sweetie factory. One day he went to the shop and brought a packet of sweets and went back home to eat them.

3. James got home to eat his sweets and the second he opened them there was this golden ticket “he said to his dad what is this” his dad said bring it here, so his dad read it out to him and James was soo surprised that he had won a wee at the sweetie factory he was jumping up and down.

4. On the golden ticket it said that it is on the 19th of July
On the golden ticket it said that it is on the 19th of July. His grandfather jumped out of his seat saying yes James yes!!!on the ticket it said the lucky person that got the ticket can choose a relative to go with you. James did not know who to go with so he rushed up to bed. While he was running he just rembered that 19th of July is tomorrow so he shouted his dad and went to sleep….

5. The minute that James got out of bed he rushed to the bathroom, while he was brushing his teeth he was thinking who he wanted to go with him to the sweetie factory. James chose his grandfather because he knew loads about the sweetie factory. Soo James ran down stairs to tell his grandfather that he had picked him grandfather Jo was so happy…

6. When they got to the gate of the sweetie factory, Mr willy wonkier came out of the doors and entered them in they all got really excited.

7. The first room they entered was the sweet room it was like being in heaven!! Mr willy wonkier started to sing and the children and parents started to run to eat all of the sweets?? YUM! YUM!

8. There was this really fat boy and he was blind and his lenses fell out then when they came out of his eyes, he fell into the marshmallows. Everybody started laugh.

9. Then the umppa loompas came to the rescue, but the little boy’s mum wasn’t very happy. The umppa loompas TRIED to get him out but you couldn’t because he was to fat!!!

10. There is this peanut room with squirrels in it and the squirrels check if the peanuts are okay to eat and this really mean and selfish girl, that always gets what she wants and she ask her dad if she could have one and her dad said no so she went into the room where squirrels are and the squirrels attacked her and pushed her into the horrible peanuts.

11. Then they went to a chocolate bar room and willy wonkier asked if any one wanted to strinck and go in the TV and get the chocolate bar, but willy wonkier got him out but they couldn’t un strink him back.. So the umppa loompas came to the rescue again to try and help him, his mum wasn’t very happy.

12. James was the last one left there was 6 people but now there is only 1 and on the back of the ticket it said the last one that lasted for the whole week will win the chocolate factory, but James did not know that it was on the back he was so happy, surprised and exciting.