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1 Editing Your Draft 1

2 OVERVIEW Review: Editing Your Draft Exercise: Editing Process
Edit draft official memorandum for desired AFSC(s) Discussion: Editing Process 2

3 Review: Editing Your Draft
Do your own edit first…w/FRESH Find another set of How will your audience respond? Start w/the BIG PICTURE…then the details Effective flow of ideas Paragraph clarity Sentences, phrases, wording 3

4 Review: Editing Your Draft
Official Memorandum Guidance: Use the template located in your SSG Use T&Q, p Questions on writing mechanics Use T&Q, Part VII (p ) 3

5 Exercise: Editing Process
Edit your drafts (5 min) Official Memorandum to Det CC Exchange drafts; re-edit 8

6 Discussion: Editing Process
Any questions? What did you learn while editing? What did you learn about your drafts?

7 Summary Review: Editing Your Draft Discussion: Editing Process
Exercise: Editing Process Edit draft official memorandum for desired AFSC(s) Discussion: Editing Process 2

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