1. WASSPPT your work…
Joe Kirkham
The Redhill Academy

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3. I traveld to London with my sister. What a great place
I traveld to London with my sister. What a great place. We visited a lot of different places while we were there. It was a phenomenal trip.
First we went to the London Eye, which is a big feriss wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked as tiny as ants.
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4. I traveld to London with my sister and it was a great place
I traveld to London with my sister and it was a great place. We visited a lot of different places while we were there. It was a phenomenal trip. First we went to the London Eye, which is a big feriss wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny.
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5. I traveld to London with my sister and it was an incredible place
I traveld to London with my sister and it was an incredible place. We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there. It was a phenomenal trip. First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic feriss wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny.
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6. I travelled to London with my sister and it was an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister and it was an incredible place. We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there. It was a phenomenal trip. First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny.
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7. I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place. We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there. It was a phenomenal trip. First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny.
Sentences for effect

8. I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place! We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there; it was a phenomenal trip. First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny…
Punctuation variety

9. I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place! We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there; it was a phenomenal trip.
//First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked tiny…
Punchy paragraphs

10. I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place! We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there; it was a phenomenal trip.
//First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked as tiny as ants…
Techniques

11. I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place
I travelled to London with my sister. What an incredible place! We visited a lot of different tourist attractions while we were there; it was a phenomenal trip.
//First we went to the London Eye, which is a gigantic Ferris wheel. From the top of the wheel, the people below looked as tiny as ants…
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