1. Yr 11 English Studies Ms Paine
Australian Poetry
Yr 11 English Studies
Ms Paine

2. Modern Australian Poetry
We will study a range of Australian poets
You will required to analyze and comment on poems individually and in comparison.
Use the Poetry Grid (supplied) to guide your thinking.

3. Poetry Grid

4. Poetry Analysis – Using the Grid
‘Suburban Sonnet’
Poet: Gwen Harwood ( )
Pg. 299 Lines to Time

5. ‘Suburban Sonnet’ (Gwen Harwood)

6. She practises a fugue, though it can matter to no one if she plays well or not.

7. Besides her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight
Besides her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight. She hushes them…

8. …A pot boils over. As she rushes to the stove too late a wave of nausea overpowers subject and counter-subject.

9. …Zest and love drain out with soapy water as she scours the crusted milk.

10. …Her veins ache. Once she played for Rubinstein, who yawned….

11. …The children caper round a sprung mouse trap where a mouse lies dead
…The children caper round a sprung mouse trap where a mouse lies dead. When the soft corpse won’t move they seem afraid.

12. She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread.

13. Poetry Grid 10 Step Process for Successfully Analyzing a Poem Using “Suburban Sonnet”

14. “Suburban Sonnet” textual references (Gwen Harwood)
“fugue”: (musical term)
A composition in which a short melody/ phrase is introduced by one part and successively taken up by others…(OED)
She practises a fugue, though it can matter
to no one now if she plays well or not.
Beside her on the floor two children chatter,
then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot
boils over. As she rushes to the stove
too late, a wave of nausea overpowers
subject and counter-subject. Zest and love
drain out with soapy water as she scours
the crusted milk. Her veins ache. Once she played
for Rubinstein, who yawned. The children caper
round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead.
When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid.
She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper
featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread.
“Rubinstein”: famous concert pianist in 1950s & 60s

15. Step 1: Subject Matter Question:
What event, situation, or experience does the poem describe or record?
“Beside her on the floor two children chatter,
then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot
boils over…”
Answer:
A suburban mother living an ordinary life eg. Children fighting, pots over boiling etc

16. Step 2: Purpose/ Key Ideas/ Message
Title: “Suburban Sonnet”
A sonnet is a famous traditional poetic form associated with Shakespeare
What does the juxtaposition with the word “Suburban” indicate?
Questions
What is the poet’s purpose in writing this?
What message does Harwood want to communicate?
Answer
Communicates despair & disappointment in being a suburban ‘desperate’ housewife rather than living an extraordinary life as a concert pianist.
“She practises a fugue, though it can matter
to no one now if she plays well or not.”
Musical reference to the career she could have had.

17. Step 3: Emotion/ Mood/ Feeling/ Tone
Questions
What is the predominant emotion, tone, or mood of the poem?
Does the mood change during the poem?
What emotions or feelings does the poet seek to evoke in the reader/ hearer?
…Zest and love
drain out with soapy water as she scours/ the crusted milk.
Answer:
Despair & disappointment
For the housewife whose life has not turned out like she had hoped for

18. Step 4: Techniques
Including (some might be more evident depending on the poem being studied):
Step 5: Structure
Step 6: Sensory Appeal
Step 7: Language
Step 8: Imagery
Step 9: Movement & Rhythm
Step 10: Sounds

19. Step 5: Structure How is the poem structured?
Does it have conventional structure such as a sonnet or ode?
Does it have stanzas with regular number of lines, or any other features of structural design?

20. Step 6: Sensory Appeal Answer No Questions
Is the poem designed to appeal to one or more of the five senses – touch, taste, smell, hearing, sight – through description?
How does this impact upon the reader?
Answer No

21. The structure of “Suburban Sonnet”
A Sonnet usually has a consistent rhyme scheme with 14 lines and a turn on thought (volta) at the 8th or 9th line. are of a similar length.
The letters indicate the rhyme/ half-rhyme scheme; but is irregular
1 She practises a fugue, though it can matter (a)
2 to no one now if she plays well or not. (b)
3 Beside her on the floor two children chatter, (a)
4 then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot (b)
5 boils over. As she rushes to the stove (c)
6 too late, a wave of nausea overpowers (d)
7 subject and counter-subject. Zest and love (c)
8 drain out with soapy water as she scours (d)
9 the crusted milk. Her veins ache. Once she played (e)
10 for Rubinstein, who yawned. The children caper (f)
11 round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead. (e)
12 When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid. (e)
13 She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper (f)
14 featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread. (e)
VOLTA as the woman reminisces about what her life could have been.

22. Step 7: Language Answers: Questions
How would you describe the poet’s use of words –vivid, striking, arresting, effective or colourless and predictable?
Is the language appropriate to the subject and/ or theme?
What effect does the language have on the reader?
Striking imagery of the dead mouse. (Unexpected)
…The children caper
round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead.
When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid.
She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper
featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread.
Irony (Tasty/ Corpse)

23. Step 8: Imagery Questions
Are there any striking examples of similes, metaphors, personifications or symbols in the poem?
What is their effect?
Metaphor: pot boiling over like vomiting & musical reference back to fugue
….A pot
boils over. As she rushes to the stove
too late, a wave of nausea overpowers
subject and counter-subject. Zest and love
drain out with soapy water as she scours
the crusted milk…
Metaphor: positive emotions draining away in the kitchen

24. Step 9 : Movement & Rhythm
Questions (Movement)
Does the poem have a regular (slow or fast) rhythm?
What is the effect of any rhythmic/ kinetic qualities on the poem’s meaning or tone?
What kind of energy does the poem have?
Answer (Movement):
Rhythm = slow
Tone = depressing
Energy = lacklustre
“Beside her on the floor two children chatter,
then scream and fight. She hushes them.”
These words are phrased to be read slowly and reflect the energy and tone of the poem.

25. Step 10: Sounds Answer: No (possibly) Questions:
Does the poem have any significant sound features? Is it musical?
Does the poet use onomatopoeia, alliteration, or assonance?
Does the poem rhyme?
What are the effects of these features of sound on the effect of the poem?
Perhaps the lack of language adornment is deliberate?
Does this fit with mood and message of the poem?

26. Critical Response & Summary
“Suburban Sonnet” (p. 299)
What is the irony in the title “Suburban Sonnet”?
What kind of activities and routines are described in this poem? What is the poet’s attitude to them? How does the reader know this?
What is the message of this poem? How does Harwood communicate it?