1. Writing PEE example
Jump Up – John Agard

2. Point Your point is a short sentence followed by some evidence
It can be about a technique, the style of the poem or your views
There is alliteration in the poem
The poem is filled with fun and joy
The poem uses personification

3. Point – suggested phrases
The writer tries to
The writer uses language to create the effect that

4. Evidence ‘Words dancin Words dancin’
The poet uses repetition and personification to describe poetry. I know this because it says ‘words dancin words dancin’
Evidence is used to support your point. You must always use quotation marks (‘’)
Only use the evidence that is necessary

5. Evidence – useful phrases
The evidence that shows this is
The quote that supports my point is
The word/s that show this is

6. Explore/Explain
The poet uses repetition and personification to describe poetry. I know this because it says ‘words dancin words dancin.’ This quotation suggests that poetry is a living, breathing person that enjoys having fun.
When you explore your point and evidence, you are exploring the effect of your point.
Remember not to repeat your point in the exploration.

7. Explain – useful phrases
The poet creates a sense of
The use of the word/s
This creates the impression that..
This quote shows…
This suggests that
This shows/implies/reveals…

8. Adding more detail
The poet uses repetition and personification to describe poetry. I know this because it says ‘words dancin words dancin’ at the beginning of the poem. This quotation suggests that poetry is a living, breathing person that enjoys having fun. These are the first lines of the poem, which immediately makes the reader feel poetry is happy and carefree.

9. Synonyms for shows Reveals Implies Exemplifies Indicates Suggests
Infers
Portrays
Conveys
demonstrates

10. Connectives However, but Firstly, Secondly, etc
In the end or At the end
In the final verse
At first
In contrast
Therefore, so,
In addition, furthermore, also

11. Grammar
Use the present tense to write your analysis apart from the sentence when you say who wrote the poem
Remember to check the third person ‘s’ on the end of verbs
Check your punctuation – commas, full-stops
Check your spelling – rhythm etc
In poems we talk about lines and verses rather than sentences.