1. Follow-up Writing 续写

2. Ⅰ Reading for brief information
Read the passage, and find out:
characters:
I(a nurse)
nurses (in the emergency room)
a mother and four children(homeless)
event:
Other nurses and I wanted to hold a ____ for
a h____ family on Christmas Day.

3. B A C Ⅱ Reading for summary Give these statements a correct order:
Actually, they were homeless, and just wanted to stay in
the hospital because it was warm there.
B. I told the nurses who were complaining about working
Christmas. Out of sympathy, the team was going to hold a
party for them.
C. On December 25th,I came across a mother and four
children who pretended as five patients.
Climax(高潮)
Ending
Development B A
Beginning C

4. theme? clue Ⅲ Reading for writing Step 1 Compose （构思） T2: Predict
T1: Read the beginning and last paragraph, and underline the verbs showing nurses ' attitudes towards working Christmas.
T2: Predict
T3: Read the 3rd paragraph, and tell the mother's feeling.
T4: Predict
unhappy, sad, cold, humble, unconfident ?
theme?
Step 1
compose
(构思）
complained turned to sympathy for a family ?
clue

5. Ⅲ Reading for writing Step 1 Compose (构思）
Read the last sentence of the passage and
sentence ①,and then think and answer:
Step 1
compose
(构思）

6. What did our team prepare for the party?
How did the nurses get what they needed for the party in such a short time?
Where was the party held?
What did the family do in the party?
Did they enjoy the party?

7. Read sentence ②, and then think and discuss:
Ⅲ Reading for writing
Step 1 Compose (构思）
Read sentence ②, and then think and discuss:
How did the family feel after the party?
What did they say to the nurses when they left?
What did they do when they left?
How did the nurses feel when the family left?
Did the nurses still complain in the end?
Step 1
compose
(构思）

8. Don' t forget to underline 5 key words! compose
Ⅲ Reading for writing
Step 2 Draft (拟稿）
Don' t forget the questions
and answers!
Don' t forget to underline
5 key words!
compose
(构思）
Pay attention to the
sentence patterns!

9. Ⅲ Reading for writing
Step 3 Polish (润色）
Step 1
compose
(构思）

10. We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day, so we asked for that meal and prepared a feast for our Christmas guests. We also needed presents, so we put together candies, fruits and other things available from different apartments. Rushing in and out of the waiting room, our team made great efforts to make a warm party to meet the needs of a homeless family who just wanted to be warm on Christmas Day.

11. When the party ended, as the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered, “ Thanks for being our angels today.” As she ran back, they all waved one more time before the door closed. Inside the nurse station stood a group of nurses with tears in their eyes, who worked a Christmas Day that they will never forget.

12. * sentence patterns（句式） * words &phrases （词和短语）
Ⅳ Conclusion
Step3
polish
（润色）
* structure（结构）
* sentence patterns（句式）
* words &phrases （词和短语） 1
Step 2
draft
（拟稿）
* development
Step 1
compose
(构思）
* key words（关键词）
* clues （线索）
* theme （主题）

13. Writing tips
A well-organized structure can highlight the theme based on the event.
Effective phrases and various sentence patterns make your passage vivid and attractive.
Appropriate conjunctions and adjectives make the passage colorful and coherent(连贯的).