1. DOL: past and present tense, capitalization, punctuation
A young woman got on the bus with her six month-old baby. The bus driver said, “ugh! Thats the ugliest baby that I’ve ever seen!”
The woman is furious. She walked to the back of the bus and sat down. She turned to the man next to her and said, “That driver just insulted me!”
The man says, “Really? There’s not call for that. You go right up there and tell him off.”
The woman hesitates.
“Go ahead,” he said. “I’ll hold your monkey for you.”

2. Possible Correction:
A young woman got on the bus with her six-month-old baby. The bus driver said, “Ugh! That’s the ugliest baby that I’ve ever seen!”
The woman was furious. She walked to the back of the bus and sat down. She turned to the man next to her and said, “That driver just insulted me!”
The man said, “Really? There’s no call for that. You go right up there and tell him off.”
The woman hesitated.
“Go ahead,” he said. “I’ll hold your monkey for you.”