1. What are you waiting for?
TARIK ZANNOUTI
What are you waiting for?
Tarik will sell your product asap
He achieve goals in high level
Very close person
 I’m crazy, but here's my number, so call me, maybe? 

2. Feedback You must put two pictures of me Letters should be bigger
Put bigger reflection of the image

3. What are you waiting for?
TARIK ZANNOUTI
What are you waiting for?
Tarik will sell your product asap
He achieve goals in high level
Always have a solution
Very close person
 I’m crazy, but here's my number, so call me, maybe? 

4. SMP SMP Emotive Benefit (others) Functional benefit (me) Features
“I have big solutions for you”
“Mr. Copy-writer . I’ll sell your product in less then a week
“I believe, You believe”
“Things should be 100% right”
“Be with me, stay with me; good thinks will appear”
Emotive Benefit
(others)
Solves other’s problem
You can give right solution
Friend can trust on me
People will think I am meticulous
Good looking
Functional benefit (me)
Always come with a solution
I know what to do or to say in the right moment
I can achieve my aim or goal
This gives me personal satisfaction
Feel clean and positive
Features
Creative
Convincing & Persuasive
Motivation
Carefully
Well-dressed

5. Why did I choose this feature
It’s a good way to create good contacts. Ass we are using human knowledge. It’s a great way to learn who you are and what are you able to do. Moreover you can know what to do or to say in the right moment. If we use knowledge people will trust and believe. In conclusion it’s easy to sell products with a good human knowledge.
The SMP formula = ‘My human knowledge’ is the only one that knows what to say in each case of life by selling ideas and products

6. Feedback from Petra
Attention grabbing 1, 'what are you waiting for' is not the right headline with this ad, the headline should be about Tarik as 'meet the master of sales' or something creative like that. And the photo of Tarik makes sense if you position him as a great sales guy. The other picture makes no sense.
I also can't see how this ad came from the ladder that starts with the feature of human knowledge... if I look at the ad the feature was actually that he can be very convincing or persuasive. Then it makes sense that someone can sell.
Interest raising 2 the little list of benefits is okay to feel he could be useful.
Desire 0 I don't see that you are offering something extra to make me feel more interested to hire him.
Action 0 if you want to be contacted but you don't write the contact details the ad will have been for nothing....

7. Revolution, meet the master of sales!!!!
TARIK ZANNOUTI
Revolution, meet the master of sales!!!!
Tarik will sell your product ASAP
He achieve goals in high level
Always have a solution
Very close person
 I’m crazy, but here's my number, so call me, maybe? 
I am the Doctor of Originality,
Quality & Clarity
Tarik Zannouti