1. English 10
March

2. Shape of the day Writing Strategies Exercise (15 – 20 minutes)
Pre-write: forgiveness or vengeance? Norway vs. USA (30 minutes)
Zero-tolerance vs. Restorative Justice (20 minutes)

3. Eliminating Wordiness
If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.
Blaise Pascal

4. Eliminating wordiness
Getting rid of passive voice
Repetition
Wordiness in general

5. Eliminating wordiness
A passive voice is not “bad”.
But too much of it can be confusing.
Getting rid of passive voice
Repetition
Wordiness in general

6. Eliminating wordiness
Getting rid of passive voice
Repetition
Wordiness in general

7. Eliminating wordiness
Getting rid of passive voice
Repetition
Wordiness in general

8. Inquiry Question of the Day
Is forgiveness or vengeance more effective for resolving conflict?

9. Halden
Prison,
Norway

10. USA

11. Which country do you think has a higher incarceration rate?
5 minute write
Which country do you think has a higher incarceration rate?
Which country has a higher re-offending rate?
Why?

12. Statistics USA Norway 700 / 100,000 75/ 100, 000 Incarceration Rate
Re-offending Rate
28 %
25 %

13. Who benefits from forgiveness? Who is hurt by vengeance?