1. Ban boring sentences!

2. There are a few ways to stop your sentences putting everyone to sleep.

3. The greedy mouse quickly ate the hard cheese.
Add words in.
The mouse ate cheese.
The greedy mouse quickly ate the hard cheese.

4. The serious man carefully got in the sporty car.
Let’s look at another.
The man got in the car.
The serious man carefully got in the sporty car.

5. The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari.
You could also change words!
The man got in the car.
The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari.

6. The monkey ate some fruit.
Let’s try one more.
The monkey ate some fruit.
King Kong gobbled plenty of bananas.

7. So to improve your sentences you need to…
Add new words.
Change some of the words.
Go on give it a try, I bet you CAN do it!