1. Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 2, 2017
Twelfth Night
Ms. Batchelor—English 3
February 2, 2017
Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, and something to write with. You do not need ipads or phones.

2. Objectives
Students will be able to review the writing prompts and brainstorm at least 3 ideas
Students will be able to construct an arguable, bold, thesis statement
Students will be able to compare/contrast the film version of Twelfth Night with the play

3. Viola and Olivia fail to communicate clearly with one another and it affects their relationship.
What is wrong with this thesis statement? How could it be improved?
Thesis statements

4. Twelfth Night film Expectations for movie viewing: Head up
No phones, iPads
No talking
Be thoughtful—how can I use this film to help me with my essay? What are some things I am noticing? How is the film like the play? How is it different?
Twelfth Night film

5. Homework:
Thesis statement and prompt selection are due tomorrow to turnitin.com at 11:59pm

6. Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 3, 2017
Twelfth Night
Ms. Batchelor—English 3
February 3, 2017
Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, and something to write with. You do not need ipads or phones.

7. Students will be able to critique three thesis statements by identifying strengths and weaknesses of each
Students will be able to recall details from the play and compare/contrast play and film adaptation.
Objectives

8. Thesis Statement Feedback
Throughout the Twelfth Night by William Shakespeare the characters seem insane due to their constant delusion, obsession, and fear for themselves and the ones they love.
Thesis Statement Feedback

9. Thesis Statement Feedback
Feste the fools position to entertain and humor Olivia makes him more of a central character in the play than a secondary one.
Thesis Statement Feedback

10. Thesis Statement Feedback
Antonio’s selfless actions reflect Shakespeare’s statement on how humans will do anything for love.
Thesis Statement Feedback

11. Twelfth Night film Expectations for movie viewing: Head up
No phones, iPads
No talking
Be thoughtful—how can I use this film to help me with my essay? What are some things I am noticing? How is the film like the play? How is it different?
Twelfth Night film

12. Homework:
Thesis statement and prompt selection are due tonight to turnitin.com at 11:59pm

13. Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 7, 2017
Twelfth Night
Ms. Batchelor—English 3
February 7, 2017
Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

14. Students will be able to view feedback concerning thesis statements
Students will be able to revise thesis statements with feedback
Students will be able to view Twelfth Night and compare/contrast the film and play
Objectives

15. Section 03—7 students without thesis statements turned in; 6 without theme tracker assignment turned in
Section 04—5 students without thesis statements turned in; 4 without theme tracker assignment
Section 05—9 students without thesis statements turned in; 9 without theme tracker
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16. Log in to turnitin.com Have you submitted your thesis statement?
Does it have feedback—either voice or written?
What changes do you think you should make?
Take 10 minutes to work silently on revising your thesis statement and creating an intro paragraph
Log in to turnitin.com

17. Homework Due tonight at 11:59 pm:
Introductory Paragraph with REVISED thesis statement
Homework

18. Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 8, 2017
Twelfth Night
Ms. Batchelor—English 3
February 8, 2017
Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

19. Have you submitted your revised thesis statement? Intro paragraph?
Does it have feedback?
What changes do you think you should make?
Take 10 minutes to work silently on revising your revised thesis statement and intro paragraph
Log in to turnitin.com

20. Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 9, 2017
Twelfth Night
Ms. Batchelor—English 3
February 9, 2017
Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

21. Objectives Spend 15 minutes creating body paragraphs/locating quotes
Students will be able to properly cite text evidence in parenthetical citations and Works Cited
Students will be able to compare/contrast movie and play
Objectives

22. Works Cited

23. In-text citations Play In-text (parenthetical) Citations:
If we are writing about one play then we would replace the play title in the parenthetical citation for the author's last name. 
Author: Shakespeare
Italicize play titles: Twelfth Night 
Use Arabic numerals to refer to act, scene, and line numbers (no page numbers are listed): 3.2.10 or   if we are covering information from lines 10 through 25. If the line number are 100 or higher, we use the first whole line number 265 and the last two digits of the second line number: 
If referring to an act and scene of a play in your the body of your text, format it as such: In 2.2, Hamlet's despondency becomes the subject of mockery amongst his peers.
If we are only referring to one work by Shakespeare in our paper than our parenthetical citation would look like this: (Shakespeare )
If we have not  yet introduced the play in the body of our paper, the first parenthetical citation will look like this: (Twelfth Night  )
In-text citations

24. Homework Complete rough draft and submit to turnitin.com by 11:59 pm
Bring a printed copy to class
Tomorrow we are completing peer reviews
Homework