1. doc.: IEEE 802.15-09-0114-00-004g-Trends-in-SUN-capacity
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Project: IEEE P Working Group for Wireless Personal Area Networks (WPANs)
Submission Title: Proposed resolutions for CIDs 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, and 45
Date Submitted: March, 2013
Source: Youngae Jeon, Sangjae Lee, and Sangsung Choi (ETRI), Soo-Young Chang (SYCA)
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Abstract: This document provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, and 45 of LB#87.
Purpose: To provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, and 45 of LB#87
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2. Comments for Sub-clauses 5.1.1.1.3 and 5.1.1.8
CID 36 (Editorial)
CID 37 (Technical)
CID 38 (Editorial)
CID 39 (Editorial)
CID 40 (Editorial)
CID 41 (Editorial)
CID 42 (Editorial)
CID 43 (Editorial)
CID 44 (Editorial)
CID 45 (Editorial)

3. CID 36 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 36 (Editorial)
Comment
Don't break up the important part of the sentence with a reference - "...is complete one IFS period, as described in , before the end of its DBS"
Proposed Change
Replace with "...is complete one IFS period before the end of its DBS. The IFS period is described in section "
Proposed Resolution
(from) A TMCTP-child PAN coordinator transmitting in the BOP shall ensure that its beacon transmission is complete one IFS period, as described in , before the end of its DBS.
(to) A TMCTP-child PAN coordinator transmitting in the BOP shall ensure that its beacon transmission is complete one IFS period before the end of its DBS. The IFS period is described in section

4. CID 37 (Technical) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 37 (Technical)
Comment
Where is Figure 5a? Has it been omitted or is the reference incorrect?
Proposed Change
Clarification required
Proposed Resolution
The figure is present. Text is hyperlinked to Figure 5a.

5. CID 38 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 38 (Editorial)
Comment
CAP, CFP, GTS definitions are all given above or in base doc.
Proposed Change
Remove acronym definitions.
Proposed Resolution
(from) The contention access period (CAP), as described in , which is used to communicate command frames and/or data The contention free period (CFP), as described in , which is composed of guaranteed time slots (GTSs). No transmissions within the CFP shall use a CSMA-CA mechanism to access the channel.
(to) The CAP, as described in , which is used to communicate command frames and/or data The CFP, as described in , which is composed of GTSs. No transmissions within the CFP shall use a CSMA-CA mechanism to access the channel.

6. CIDs 39 and 40 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CIDs 39 and 40 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 39: Missing the "...are same as described in…"
CID 40: "The SD and BI of the TMCTP superframe are same as…", should be "The SD and BI of the TMCTP superframe are the same as…"
Proposed Change
CID 39: Add the ie "..are the same as described in…"
CID 40: Make it so.
Proposed Resolution
(from) The SD and BI of the TMCTP superframe are same as described in
(to) The SD and BI of the TMCTP superframe are the same as described in

7. CIDs 41 and 42 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CIDs 41 and 42 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 39: "aNumSuprframeSlots", should be "aNumSuperframeSlots“.
CID 40: typo error, "aNumSuprframeSlots" should be "aNumSuperframeSlots"
Proposed Change
CID 39: Make it so for line 14 and for line 18 as well.
CID 40: Make the change
Proposed Resolution
(from) = aBaseSlotDuration × ( aNumSuprframeSlots × 2macTMCTPExtendedOrder )
(to) = aBaseSlotDuration × ( aNumSuperframeSlots × 2macTMCTPExtendedOrder )
(from) The ED of each TMCTP superframe shall be divided into aNumSuprframeSlots × 2macTMCTPExtendedOrder equally spaced slots of duration aBaseSlotDuration and is …
(to) The ED of each TMCTP superframe shall be divided into aNumSuperframeSlots × 2macTMCTPExtendedOrder equally spaced slots of duration aBaseSlotDuration and is …

8. CIDs 43 and 44 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CIDs 43 and 44 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 43: 1st instance and def. of acronym BOP occur above in 4.2.
CID 44: Is there a missing "a" in the sentence "...composed of beacon only period (BOP). "?
Proposed Change
CID 43: Remove acronym defintion.
CID 44: Add a ie "...composed of a beacon only period (BOP) "
Proposed Resolution
(from) … equally spaced slots of duration aBaseSlotDuration and is composed of beacon only period (BOP).
(to) … equally spaced slots of duration aBaseSlotDuration and is composed of a BOP.

9. CID 45 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 45 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 43: "macsuperframeOrder" missing capital "S"
Proposed Change
CID 43: Change to macSuperframeOrder
Proposed Resolution
(from) … according to the macBeaconOrder, the macsuperframeOrder and the macTMCTPExtendedOrder as shown in Figure 11ha.
(to) … according to the macBeaconOrder, the macSuperframeOrder and the macTMCTPExtendedOrder as shown in Figure 11ha.