1. Hero’s Journey Essays
Time to Revise

2. 20 points = Quotes (5 points each, 2 from movie, 2 from article)
There?
Lead in?
Correct parenthetical citation?
Matching entry in Works cited?
Correct Punctuation?
20 points = Evidence
All 12 stages (1 point per stage). Be sure to name the stage and match it to an event(s) in the movie
Explanation of theory (8 points)

3. 10 points = thesis statement 10 points = topic sentences
20 points = Cohesion
Between topic sentences & content of paragraph
Each paragraph relates back to thesis
Smooth transition between ideas
Includes introduction & conclusion
*If you don’t have topic sentences, you can’t earn these 20 points.
*Be sure to transition between ideas and from one paragraph to the next.

4. 10 points = phrases 10 points = grammar
1st/6th: 3 appositive, 3 prepositional
3rd/5th: 2 appositive, 2 prepositional, 2 participial
10 points = grammar
I have not deducted any points for grammar yet. We will revisit this once revisions have been submitted.

5. You will lose 10 points if…
It is not in MLA format
Heading
Title
Ink
You have not highlighted & labeled
Thesis
Topic sentences
4 quotes
phrases