1. Effective writing tips:
Have a sizzling start

2. Compare the two openings:
What sets these two introductions apart?

3. Writing tip #1 Start a narrative where the action begins.
In the case of the previous example, the action begins when the character sneaks up to the monkey’s cage.
It is far more interesting to start with the action than when they woke up in the morning.
Narrative – a story

4. Let’s apply this advice
Write an engaging paragraph that outlines the following scenario:
You are travelling to school on a train. You have a very important test that morning. The train breaks down.