1. Research Reports: Paragraphs

2. X You will like going to Sudbury because I found it very interesting.
Sudbury is an interesting city to visit.
Stay in Third Person

3. Don’t state the obvious
X My next point is that Science North is interesting.
Science North is an engaging museum, with many interactive exhibits suitable for both children and adults.
Don’t state the obvious

4. Quotation Style Use your own words to introduce quotations.
Although Sudbury is a small city, “it's rich in hidden gems, incredible scenery and attractions as well as events that are perfect for families.” (
Quotation Style

5. Ensure that Discussion is Analysis, not simply restatement
X Although Sudbury is a small city, “it's rich in hidden gems, incredible scenery and attractions as well as events that are perfect for families.” (
northeastern-ontario/sudbury-attractions) There are many things to do in Sudbury.
Although Sudbury is a small city, “it's rich in hidden gems, incredible scenery and attractions as well as events that are perfect for families.” (
northeastern-ontario/sudbury-attractions) No matter what
your age or interests, you can find something that suits
you in the city of Sudbury.
Discussion = Analysis