1. doc.: IEEE 802.15-09-0114-00-004g-Trends-in-SUN-capacity
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Project: IEEE P Working Group for Wireless Personal Area Networks (WPANs)
Submission Title: Proposed resolutions for CIDs 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11
Date Submitted: March, 2013
Source: Youngae Jeon, Sangjae Lee, and Sangsung Choi (ETRI), Soo-Young Chang (SYCA)
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Abstract: This document provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11 of LB#87.
Purpose: To provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11 of LB#87
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2. Comments for Sub-clauses 3.1 and 3.2
CID 4 (Editorial)
CID 5 (Editorial)
CID 6 (Editorial)
CID 7 (Editorial)
CID 8 (Editorial)
CID 9 (Editorial)
CID 10 (Technical)
CID 11 (Editorial)

3. CID 4 (Editorial)-(1) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: AP
CID 4 (Editorial)-(1)
Comment
Why does TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN have the acronym in brackets when Super PAN Coordinator does not?
Proposed Change
Remove (TMCTP) from definition to be consistent
Proposed Resolution
(from) TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN (TMCTP): A PAN operating in a TVWS band employing a Super PAN coordinator to form a multi-channel cluster tree topology.
(to) television white spaces (TVWS) multichannel cluster tree personal area network (PAN) (TMCTP): A PAN operating in a TVWS band employing a super-PAN coordinator (SPC) to form a multi-channel cluster tree topology.

4. CS: AP
CID 4 (Editorial)-(2)
(from) Super PAN Coordinator: The PAN coordinator of a TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN which was access to the TVWS geolocation database and provides synchronization services for the TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN.
(to) super-personal area network (PAN) coordinator: The PAN coordinator of a television white spaces (TVWS) multichannel cluster tree PAN (TMCTP) which was access to the TVWS geolocation database and provides synchronization services for the TMCTP. (See CID 7.)
(from) TMCTP-child PAN Coordinator: A logical child device that is responsible for maintaining synchronization with its TMCTP-parent device in the TMCTP while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN.
(to) television white spaces (TVWS) multichannel cluster tree personal area network (PAN) (TMCTP)-child PAN coordinator: A logical child device that is responsible for maintaining synchronization with its TMCTP-parent device in the TMCTP while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN.

5. CS: AP
CID 4 (Editorial)-(3)
(from) TMCTP-parent PAN Coordinator: A logical parent device that is responsible for providing synchronization services to its TMCTP-child devices in the TMCTP using a channel allocated by the SPC if this device is not the SPC while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN.
(to) television white spaces (TVWS) multichannel cluster tree personal area network (PAN) (TMCTP)-parent PAN coordinator: A logical parent device that is responsible for providing synchronization services to its TMCTP-child devices in the TMCTP while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN. (See CID 10.)
(from) TVWS Channel: Spectrum unit allocation as defined by the TV bands channel availability database.
(to) television white spaces (TVWS) channel: Spectrum unit allocation as defined by the television (TV) bands channel availability database.

6. CID 4 (Editorial)-(4) See IEEE Std 802.15.4-2011 as reference
CS: AP
CID 4 (Editorial)-(4)
See IEEE Std as reference
nonbeacon-enabled personal area network (PAN): A PAN in which coordinators do not emit regular beacons.
personal area network (PAN) coordinator: A coordinator that is the principal controller of a PAN. An IEEE network has exactly one PAN coordinator.
See IEEE Std e-2012 as reference
low latency deterministic network (LLDN): A personal area network (PAN) organized as a star network with a superframe structure and using LLDN frames.
low latency deterministic network (LLDN) device: A device in an LLDN that is associated to an LLDN coordinator.

7. CIDs 5, 6, 7, 8, and 9 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change
CS: AP
CIDs 5, 6, 7, 8, and 9 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 5: "which was access" s/b "which has access "
CID 6: "...which was access… "
CID 7: Super PAN Coordinator
CID 8: "Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN which was access to the TVWS" does not seem right
CID 9: Uses full name "TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN", when acronym should be used.
Proposed Change
CID 5: See comment
CID 6: Change was to has
CID 7: Hyphenate - ie "Super-PAN Coordinator "
CID 8: "Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN which has access to the TVWS"
CID 9: Replace both instance with TMCTP
Proposed Resolution
(from) Super PAN Coordinator: The PAN coordinator of a TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN which was access to the TVWS geolocation database and provides synchronization services for the TVWS Multichannel Cluster Tree PAN.
(to) super-personal area network (PAN) coordinator: The PAN coordinator of a television white spaces (TVWS) multichannel cluster tree PAN (TMCTP) which was access to the TVWS geolocation database and provides synchronization services for the TMCTP.
(from) SPC super PAN coordinator
(to) SPC super-PAN coordinator
Change according to CID 7
See sub-clause 3.2 on the page 5

8. CID 10 (Technical) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: AP
CID 10 (Technical)
Comment
Wordy definition. Defines the term, not the function of the thing the term refers to (that goes in the normative text)
Proposed Change
A device that is acting as a coordinator of a PAN and providing synchronization services to its TMCTP-child devices in the TMCTP.
Proposed Resolution
(from) A logical parent device that is responsible for providing synchronization services to its TMCTP-child devices in the TMCTP using a channel allocated by the SPC if this device is not the SPC while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN.
(to) A logical parent device that is responsible for providing synchronization services to its TMCTP-child devices in the TMCTP while it operates as the coordinator of a PAN.

9. CID 11 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 11 (Editorial)
Comment
beacon only period
Proposed Change
Hyphenate - ie "beacon-only period"
Proposed Resolution
(from) BOP beacon only period
(to) BOP beacon-only period