1. Can you use one sentence to make a summary of my self-introduction?
My temporary teacher Rose from Yuying-Middle School,who
is looking forward to our cooperation and perfect performance.

2. Summary
高考新题型之
概要写作
Rosechen陈慧娇 育英中学

3. 《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文
写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
词数少于40的和多余80的，
从总分中减去2分

4. 评分原则 4C原则 complete complete correct correct coherent ﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
第五档 (21-25)
理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。 完全使用自己的言语。
complete
complete
correct
correct
coherent
﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏
concise:no copying

5. Argumentation (议论文） Forms of Literature Exposition （说明文）
Narration （记叙文）
(who when where what why how)

6. Reading:The Sporting Robot
Writing Steps for narration summary????
Reading:The Sporting Robot

7. What form of passage is it?
Writing Step 1: Read for form，key information
What form of passage is it?
A. Argumentation B. A self-introduction（Narration） C. Exposition
My name is Hua Fei and I am a sporting robot of the 23rd century. I am an expert …

8. Para 1：Basic information about the robot
Name: __________
When: ____________________
Occupation: ___________________
Ability: _______________________________
Prize won: _____________________________
Hua Fei
Who
In the 23rd century
When
A sporting robot
An expert at ..., ... turn, dive ...
Silver medal in the 78th Olympics
What

9. * Basic information about Hua Fei:
Name: __________
When: ____________________
Occupation: ___________________
Ability: _______________________________
Prize won: ______________________________
Hua Fei
In the 23rd century
A sporting robot
An expert at high flying exercises
Silver medal in the 78th Olympics
* main idea (Para 1) :
Hua Fei is a sporting robot of the 23rd century. He is an expert at high flying exercises. He took part in the 78th Olympics and won a silver medal.
Tips: 1) write it in the third person ) focus on the main points and leave out examples.

10. para2-3：The 79th Olympics that Hua Fei took part in:
Writing Step 1: Read for form，main idea
para2-3：The 79th Olympics that Hua Fei took part in:
Why
Reasons for the failure:
__________________
_____________________
Programmer fell ill;
Frightened; not confident;
A problem with ...

11. * His failure in the 79th Olympics:
Reasons for the failure: __________________
______________________________________
Programmer fell ill;
Frightened; not confident;
A problem with ...
* main idea (Para 2-3):
Before the competition, his programmer fell ____. Knowing this, Hua Fei was __________ and no longer felt _________. In the day of the competition, there
was a problem with the parachute. He fell from the
sky and landed ________ on a mountain.
ill
frightened
confident
heavily

12. para4：The treatment of Hua Fei
WritingStep 1: Read for form,key information
para4：The treatment of Hua Fei
Where: _________________________
What happened: _____________________________
Treatment: ________________________________
How
lying in hospital bed
Two broken legs and a fragile head
Two new legs and a bigger head

13. Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narration's 6factors)
who
Hua Fei
when
of the 23rd century
where
78th Olympic, 79th Olympic
what
win a silver medal failed
why
his programmer fell ill
No longer confident
a problem with parachute
how
get treatment
(with two new legs and even bigger head)

14. How to polish your summary to meet the 4C requirements of criteria
Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narration's 6factors)
How to polish your summary to meet the 4C requirements of criteria
complete
correct
coherent
concise(no copying)

15. I feel nervous/worried/anxious
Writing Step 3:Polish the sentences to meet 4cs
to be concise(5 skills)
① I no longer felt so confident that I would win.
同义词替换
I no longer believe myself that I would succeed/achieve.
反义转换
I feel nervous/worried/anxious
that I would be defeated/lose/fail.
改变词性
I am lack/short of confidence that I would win.

16. Writing step 3: Polish the sentences to meet 4cs to be consise
复合句、简单句的互换
▲ The fact that I might be defeated worries me.
句型转换
▲ I was so nervous that I might lose the competition
▲ It is the possibility of losing that makes me anxious.

17. Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century,
Writing Step 3: Polish the sentences to be concise,meet4cs
Have a drill:rewrite the following main idea using the four skills and try to be concise(20words or so)
Para1：Hua Fei is a sporting robot of the 23rd century. He is an expert at high flying exercises. He took part in the 78th Olympics and won a silver medal.
Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century,
who is good at high flying, got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics.

18. Writing step 3: Polish the sentences to be concise
Writing Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways
Para 2-3：Before the competition, his programmer fell ill. Knowing this, Hua Fei was and no longer felt conficent. In the day of the competition, there was a problem with the parachute. He fell from the sky and landed heavily on a mountain.
Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong .

19. Writing step 4: Make the summary coherent
Add two linking words to make the passage coherent
①Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics.
However/But/While/Though
② Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong .
As a result/Thus/Therefore/So
③ He is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.

20. Writing step 5: Revise
4 “C” : complete, correct,
concise, coherent
Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics. However Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong.Thus he is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.
( 68 words)

21. Writing Step 6: Clearly copy your draft to the paper

22. Steps to write a summary(narration)
1.Read
2.Make a summary based on 6 elements of narration
3.Polish to be concise and to meet 4cs
4. Make it coherent
5. Revise (4C)
6. Neatly copy

23. Homework:
Make a summary of passage B