1. Do Now: take your Grammar Reference Folder from the folder holder

2. Objective: to prepare for our first in-class essay
November 2, 2017
Objective: to prepare for our first in-class essay
Opening: meditation
Work Period: grammar
Closing: essay structure

3. Vocab assignments due Monday, quiz Tuesday!
Homework
Think of 2-3 “dragons” you have faced in your life, and be prepared to write about them!
Vocab assignments due Monday, quiz Tuesday!

4. 1-minute Meditation

5. Grammar, Transition Words

6. Thesis statement: presents your position on the topic of your paper.
Thesis Review
Thesis statement: presents your position on the topic of your paper.
Usually about 1-2 sentences
Found at the end of intro paragraph
Be as clear as possible! Ensure the reader knows exactly what you will be talking about.
Avoid vague, abstract words: get right to the point of what you will be discussing. Make specific references to your paper in particular.
Think: why does this matter? Why should the reader want to read my paper?

7. Examples
Weak thesis: Job opportunities in technological fields are expanding.
Strong thesis: Due to the rapid demand of instant communication by cell phone and computer usage, employment opportunities are growing within major companies such as Apple and Microsoft.
Weak thesis: The Harry Potter book series is more enjoyable than the movies.
Strong thesis: Due to J.K. Rowling’s vivid imagery, strong characterization, and ability to craft suspense, the Harry Potter books are better crafted than the less-detailed films.

8. Practice Craft a strong thesis stating your position on:
Is Valentine’s Day a real holiday?
Should school extend through the summer, but the day be shortened?
Dogs vs. cats
Coffee vs. tea
Essays vs. exams