1. Journal Entry #9
Title: Anti-Bullying
You have 7 minutes to write a story or give an example about this prompt. Format matters.

2. Tuesday:
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3. Tuesday: because: The word because was missing in the original update.
Patriots won a Superbowl: Patriots and Superbowl should be capitalized because they are proper nouns. Won should be used as it is the past tense form of the verb.
quarterback: The full word quarterback should be written, or you could also use capital letters to abbreviate (QB).
all time. Now,: This was a run on sentence, so end punctuation is added. A comma is also included after the word now as it is an introductory element.
changes, controversies, or reprimands: Commas separate items in a series.
thrown: Thrown was misspelled.
their: While there refers to a place, their refers to possession/belonging.
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