1. How significant was the contribution of Garibaldi in determining the outcome of unification?

2. How significant was the contribution of Garibaldi in determining the outcome of unification? (30 marks)
Lesson Aim:
To have applied knowledge from last lesson to plan a full mark essay!

3. TASK: Create a table with information in.
How significant was the contribution of Garibaldi in determining the outcome of unification? (30 marks)
Mini whiteboards…
What factors could we talk about?
TASK: Create a table with information in.

4. Intro:
Outline of the topic/context.
Factors in order I will talk about them – Garibaldi 1st in Q.
Set up the line of argument I will follow – strong link to Q
Evidence!
Academic language.

5. How do I write a good PEEL paragraph?
1. Point: Key message of paragraph
2. Evidence: Facts/quotes/sources which illustrate your point
3. Explanation: Explain how your evidence supports your point.
4. Link: Sum-up how your paragraph helps to answer the overall question/link to argument.

6. Conclusion:
Re-cap the key factors of the essay (without too much detail or repeating).
Come to a firm judgement fully answering the question.
Come back to the command words– use language which answers this.
Length of entire essay – not that long!