1. Team Sports or Individual Sports

2. Adapted Student Introductions
Note: It is suggested that young writers omit stating reasons in their thesis statements in order to avoid grammar situations and to later minimize incidences of repetition.

3. Stress, low self-esteem, poor health and lack of discipline are problems that may all be solved by playing sports. Some people choose to play team sports such as football or basketball while others prefer to play individual sports such as tennis or gymnastics. It is true that playing team sports can be quite fulfilling; nevertheless, I believe that the rewards for participating in individual sports can be even more rewarding.
Flipped: Although it is true that playing team sports can be quite fulfilling, I believe that the rewards for participating in individual sports can be even more rewarding.
A.G.
Pt. 2
Pt. 3
Can you locate the sweet nectar of parallelism in the above example?

4. Whether it is football or golf, baseball or swimming, gymnastics or lacrosse, sports can make a big difference in a person’s life. It is common that a person must choose between dedicating one’s self to a team sport and dedicating one’s self to an individual sport. Though it is true that competing in individual sports can be greatly rewarding, I believe that competing in team sports can be even more fulfilling.
Identify the A.G., Part 2 and its purpose, and Part 3 and its purpose.
Where are the examples of strong parallelism?
Parallelism is your friend!
Now, flip that puppy!