1. Teacher: Tan Xiaoxia(谭晓霞) Student: Grade Six Date: Nov.6th, 2012
Writing
Teacher: Tan Xiaoxia(谭晓霞)
Student: Grade Six
Date: Nov.6th, 2012

2. Read the pictures carefully.
My friend

3. Picture 1

4. Picture 2

5. Picture 3

6. Picture 4

7. My friend

8. My friend
My friend, Peter, likes reading very much. He went everywhere with a book. He read books on his way home. He also read books when he had dinner. He still read books in his bed at night. One day, he couldn’t see things clearly, so he went to see a doctor. The doctor told him to take care of his eyes. Now, Peter reads books in his study every day.

9. Tips for writing about pictures
Step 1: read the pictures carefully and
write key words or phrases
Step 2: write an article
Step 3: read your article again and
make it better

10. Learn to write
A trip to the park

11. A trip to the park
Tom and Linda are good friends. One day, they went to the park together. In the park, they sang and danced happily. They ran after the butterflies, too. In the park, there were a lot of beautiful flowers. Linda liked the flowers, so she picked one. But Tom told her not to pick flowers because it was bad for our environment. Linda promised not to pick flowers again. What a wonderful trip it was!

12. Tips for making the writing better
Read your article again and try to :
1. find the spelling mistakes. (拼写错误)
2. find the grammar mistakes, such as tenses, agreement, etc. (语法错误，如时态，主谓一致等)
3. rewrite some sentences to make them better by using some conjunctions. (美化句子，可以使用连接词等)
4. check if the content is reasonable and logical. (检查内容是否合理，逻辑是否通顺)

13. Writing makes you bright!

14. Homework
1. To make your writing better